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This story is good... but there are a LOT of problems with your writing and it makes it hard to read sometimes. I think I'm right in assuming English isn't your first language, so you needn't feel to bad about it, but perhaps you could think about looking for a beta reader? This could be more than just a good, fun story; it could be a really great story with slightly better writing style.

Anyway I enjoyed it so I favourited anyway.

what is your native language? pm me sometime!

too cute and at least ron didn't act crazy and instead is being mature about it.

Haha that one really funny, i like how u view ron not as a hot blooded temper

Very funny and kinda sweet. I like how you made Ron more mature in your story. Most people make Ron a good friend but whinny or he gets mad at Harry and Hermione. I think the way you portray Ron is sweet.

This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.

cute

great to read this h/hr fluff story.

Good update!

I look forward to seeing more interaction between Harry and Hermione, they need to discuss this change in their relationship. I look forward to seeing Rons reaction to them being a couple.

nice start
cool

looks like a good start

Cute so far. I like Harry and Hermione together. :) You do have quite a few spelling/grammer errors so you may want to re-read your chapter. Like the story so far, please update chapter 2 soon! ;)

By the way, Neville has a frog, Trevor.