|Reviews for The Half-Blood|
| RiverPhoenix chapter 3 . 7/31/2013
Awesome story! Well written to! Btw, the Big House is blue. It was red in the 80's
| AwkwardAuburn2 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Really really good. Love it!
| hotstuffnumber1 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
luv ure story sooo much
| hellfire lord chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
The sole problem is that Ron isn't like you wrote him. Percy has fought giants capable os crushing him with a toe. A somewhat tall kid with under-physichal attributes can't scare him.
| General E chapter 5 . 5/31/2013
are you seriously quitting just because i sweared and " matt" called you "blind and mentally insane" he was probably just tired of authors thinking harry and potter look the same just because of their hair color and eye color. And i just accidently sweared in a review. your story isn't bad just really ooc and the characters are incomplete
| ETGH chapter 4 . 5/21/2013
I really like your story! Please update!
| General E chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
why did the wizards randonly attack annebeth. That makes them sound like assholes
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
WARNING! YOU MIGHT NOT LIKE THE NEXT PART! (I did warn you)
It's good but you keep making Percy too... obtuse. Percy knows he can die any second because of monster attacks and the war. He's a demigod and he's not as stupid as you are making him.
You are making people slightly OOC, but that's why I read these stories, so I don't care (Does that count as a double compound sentence? Sorry I'm only in 6th Grade.).
You make Percy seem like the idea of dying never occurred to him before which makes him either really dumb or really messed up. Sorry for the slight burn (okay so it might have been more then slight), but I am merely stating my opinion on your story, and it honestly is good.
I just want it to reach its full potential, but if you don't agree with my views, you don't have to change it. It's your story, and I understand if you don't wish to change it.
YOU MAY NOW READ!
Good job on the story. The plot twister was pretty good. Keep up the good work and update.
| Matt chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
You must be blind and mentally insane if you think Harry and Percy look alike!
| elena everdeen jackson chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
Update soon please
| The Evil Elf Lord chapter 3 . 5/8/2013
Love it so far! Please update soon!
| coolroseabby chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
please get the nex chapter up PLEASE
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
awesome! please update!
| Freezing Fyre chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Why didn't Percy just call Mrs. O' Leary for shadow travel, or even Blackjack?
| M0RKIESTAR chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
GOOD... But I don't remember Ron being so... brute.