|Reviews for The Halfa Factory|
| Harmony-Dew chapter 7 . 5/24/2016
this story is great but it is weird to see Danny as the bad guy
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/8/2016
WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE!?
| Angel3687 chapter 6 . 11/27/2014
Would you please update again? I kindda like where this story is going :)
| Angel3687 chapter 7 . 11/5/2014
please update 3
| GhostEnvy chapter 7 . 6/6/2014
Even without updates this is still one of my favorite stories I have read on this site...
| Ruby 1334 chapter 7 . 2/27/2014
I actually think she took that in pretty well.
I wonder how this story is going to turn out...
Can't wait till the next update!
| Ruby 1334 chapter 6 . 2/27/2014
She doesn't even know...
Man, I wonder just how extreme her reaction will be when she finds out...
| Ruby 1334 chapter 5 . 2/27/2014
Okay. Things to remember: Something's up with his hair.
Danny as an actual villain...
This is going to take awhile to get my head around.
Yes, I will admit that I thought he was being forced to do it.
That's all I've got to say for now...
| Ruby 1334 chapter 4 . 2/26/2014
When I find out who it was...:
YOU'RE NOT DOING THIS TO SAM!
THIS IS MUCH WORSE THAN ANYONE ELSE!
OUT OF ALL THE HALFA'S...
I died... :(
(not literally. But still... :( )
| Ruby 1334 chapter 3 . 2/26/2014
That authors note makes me feel nervous...
Wasn't that like, your first authors note?
I think I've known what happens in the halfa factory the whole time.
And if I'm right:
you've got it all wrong...
It's going to happen in the next chapter...
| Ruby 1334 chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
Okay. No questions.
Hard out chapter! You're really good at building up suspense! :D
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
| Ruby 1334 chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
I can only guess that this is an ooc of Sam.
(because of her friend being Tucker.)
Danny's got to be involved with this somehow!
Very interesting idea...
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
| Mary chapter 3 . 1/31/2014
Is the reason that only females that guys can't get pregnant?
| Apoapsis chapter 4 . 9/25/2013
AWWW...Danny's a heartless rapist...poo. D:
| GlraxaystarfireKatnissbluerose chapter 7 . 7/22/2013