Reviews for Seconds Out
ahtlolevad72 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
really great!
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013

You know, Tony and God ... this is one of those relationships that is so complicated and with so many layers, too. Tony's relationships are all complicated :P but I really love the way you wrote his conversation with the Big Man.

I mean, he's all bitter at first, but then he starts talking and he can't stop himself from speaking the truth, about how scared he was, how the blood was everywhere, how he loves her (and how God already knows that, of course), and how he just needs her, and he just sounds so TONY. So much like how Tony DiNozzo would talk to God. It's ridiculous, how well you do this. I really, really love it.


Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Suspenseful, heart-wrenching, and believable.
Jean89 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I very much liked this! Good job!
Kaivflo chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
That was great... Very much in character with something I could see Tony doing.
Lt. Keith chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Really loved this story. Short but full of emotion and very well written. Good Job
jdeasselin chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
oh my gosh - you are a wonderful creative writer...this was a joy to read.
like a little Easter GIFT. Thank you for this...
Moonbeamsandstarshine chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
This story is so well written it grabbed my attention from the first sentence. I read it to a friend of mine who isn't even a tiva shipper and she fell in love with the story. Please update soon!
Mel chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
I'd love to see more of this:) Wonderfully written!