|Reviews for Lying Eyes|
| TheMoonIsBlue chapter 10 . 7/17
Semes: 1) Zero, 2) Grimm, 3) Havi, 4) Lavi
Ukes: 1) Kana, 2) Bya, 3) Val, 4) Yuu
Forgot to guess seme and uke...
| TheMoonIsBlue chapter 9 . 7/17
Zero and Kana from Vampire Knight. Havi and Val from Crimson Spell. Yuu and Lavi from D. Gray Man. Grimm and Bya from Bleach. I don't remember the others...
| Korregidora chapter 12 . 10/6/2014
Waaaaaaa what a cliffhanger! :( Hope you update someday soon.
| Korregidora chapter 11 . 10/6/2014
Lol, quite the list of summons! When you first mentioned the names I was like, "Omg no way!" Then I saw Iruka's impressive list. Hm...wish they were MY summons. ;P
| yotsuba chapter 12 . 2/15/2014
omg! this story is chock full of crazy plot twists! Can't wait for the next update!
| KkChibiChop chapter 12 . 1/25/2014
Wha? You can't leave me hanging like that! Darn! Okay, well I can't wait for the next chapter!
| blacquesironrain chapter 10 . 8/15/2013
I meant 'next chapters'...see EVERYONE makes mistakes; so use the flames to cook you something good to eat...
| blacquesironrain chapter 11 . 8/15/2013
I've only read this story and I think you have a great plot/story...it fiction and fanfiction at that, that means it's yours to do what you want...anyway love the story; looking forward to the not chapters
| trinidad chapter 11 . 7/14/2013
bueeeeeeeeno... i don'tspeak english...
but i like your fic
google traslator me ayuda a traduccir tu fic y leerlo lastimosamente no puedo escribir un buen review por que no escribo ni hablo ingles... le entiendo algo pero escribir me es dificil, mas debo decirte que no hagas caso a ciritcas que no son constructivas, la verdad hay muchosss en fanfiction net que solo se dedican a incordiar, cuando no saben lo dificil que es escribir algo, lo duro que es planear el siguiente fic y morirte de verguenza si no te sale cmo querias y lo frustrante cuando te bloqueas, a esos que no entienden lo que es ser fanficker ni les des la importancia que buscan... pues solo buscan eso que alguien los idolatre y alabe por las burradas con las que califican nuestros fics
animo y sige adelante, ya que hya que tener muchho valor para escribir un fic y terminarlo
| Reader chapter 11 . 7/6/2013
Yeah...I'm sorry that you took my review as a flame. I said it was an interesting story but a bit disjointed which is why I suggested a beta. I don't typically go into profiles unless I want to read more of what someone has written so how would I know? The whole point for reviews is to help a writer get better. Not to placate you with "OH SO COOL!" or "UPDATE QUICKLY PLZ!" Also, you could easily google the words to see if you spelled it right. With how popular the actual anime is, the correct spelling pops up quickly. If you want people to read your fics, you should try to put some more effort into it. If you can update fics, you can use the internet to google something. I think this could have been an awesome story because like I said, the plot is unique and cool.
Also, sorry for not making an account just to review your fic. : Perhaps I shall do so when I have the time. And the last thing..."One last thing, are the little notes that I ocassionally put at the bottom annoying? Because that's what they said and now I need to know."
I meant when you put a "footnote" with the (1) and (2), etc. If it's part of the fic than include it. It detracts from the whole but that's just my opinion.
That being said, I do hope you continue to write. I think this fic has potential.
| fyrbyrd074 chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
Don't give up because of a flamer. I know they can get to you, believe me I write on AFF because I hate the fans on this site and also I write Yaoi in all it's glory. I like to read interesting stories and IRUKAKA's I will only look at a KAKAIRU if it has a very good story. I've been following Naruto from the beginning and I've not noticed any inaccuracies, even of there were it has not bothered me or I would have stopped reading. I get am shit at grammar and have never found a steady BETA. I also haven't written a thing because I got disheartened, so I understand that. But I am a mother of a teenage boy and have a full time shit job and lost time being too tired, plus I write well to music, I've started to write a little again and I watch Anime almost every day, read Naruto weekly, anxiously too. I have learned one thing though, write for yourself, not anyone else, that where I went off the rails as well. Just piss on them flames and continue. If you want some support I would stand in your corner. DON'T GIVE UP!
| Reader chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
Uh...you do know it's Uchiha not Uchila? Please spell the characters' names correctly. It's really irritating. The plot is interesting but disjointed. Not to mention all of the notes at the bottom really detracts from the whole story. Also, you might want to get a beta. The spelling mistakes are strange as well. For example, sharingan not Shardigan and shinobi not Shinoubi.
| SilverWhiteDragon chapter 9 . 6/21/2013
...Bleach, -man, and Kuroshitsuji, right? LOL.
| darkblue91 chapter 8 . 6/10/2013
Love it XD
| Kekeh chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
Wow ... Exciting (although I do not like Sasuke and Naruto together). Anyway, Voua wait for the next chapters ...