Reviews for How Far we have Come
A McKnight chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I love that your Bella doesn't have perfect control-that she has to struggle as do others of her kind. It makes her more believeable as a vampire. Also, allowing Jasper to rise above his baser instincts gives hm the opportunity to truly connect with Bella and perhaps help her through this difficult time. SM, I think, did Jasper an injustice by burdening him with such weakness. Although Jasper spent decades as a drinker of human blood, his empathy is what ultimately drove him to attempt to abandon that life. His deep aversion to the emotions of those he had killed would surely have motivated our dear Jasper to succeed in making the lifestyle change he so desperately sought. Great job!
melinda044 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
I think so far so good! I'm hoping that you will write more soon because I am loving reading your story. Are you going to go into what/who/why Bella slipped up? Also are you going to write Nessie into the story? I can't wait to read more of Twilight ibm your mind!