Reviews for Captain's Past
DevilsTouch chapter 14 . 3/17
I just hoped you let the fake death of Sabo played on like om this will be more heart wrenching and we could see the letter he gave and how Ace cried like a baby ughhhhh
DragonFire Princess chapter 18 . 12/11/2014
Kiki1770 chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
This was a great story idea but the reason for suddenly jumping into Luffy's memories was too weak, and Silk seems like a self-insert so far. I actually hate OCs so maybe I'm being a bit harsh, but so far her only role seems to rub it into everyone's faces that she's knows Luffy's past and they don't. While Luffy might have a harsher past in your story, it seems a bit insensitive for Silk to act as though what Ace and the others experienced was insignificant in comparison. Starvation, a child deprived of love, being forcibly made to draw maps till your hands bleed, watching your entire village die from the buster call, being called a liar to the point that when you tell the truth no one believes you, watching your childhood friend die, these are all pretty serious issues too. So comparing them was...well not nice.
Lady of the Shards chapter 18 . 2/25/2014
This story was interesting! I'm glad that I got to read it!
NightHunterDeath chapter 18 . 1/7/2014
It was a good, the ending could have been better, but oh well :)
general yumi chapter 18 . 11/19/2013
I LOVE this story! Poor pierce DX
zealous soul chapter 18 . 9/30/2013
It's too short for my liking but it's still the ending, I guess...Good job...
DeathToPink300 chapter 18 . 9/21/2013
i hate memory fics but this one was amazing ! keep up the hard work
ColorfulSky chapter 18 . 9/20/2013
You should make a sequel where they watch the rest of the memories
SoyokazeArumada chapter 18 . 9/13/2013
congratulations great that was great
Guest chapter 18 . 9/7/2013
Whoops, I didn't realize I was in guest mode. I apologize. I will get online ASAP to pm you.
yukiko hyuga-chan chapter 18 . 9/7/2013
Thank you for this great story!
caring16 chapter 18 . 9/7/2013
WELL that was one fine ending to the captains past now to go sneak a peek elsewhere *poofs away*
caring16 chapter 17 . 9/7/2013
Nah don't lose your head I wouldn't hurt you unless you either hurt someone i loved well thats it really. also another great chapter. :D psst you should watch out for my evil side it sometimes likes to come out and play MAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Mikato Moshi chapter 18 . 9/7/2013
OMG such a great ending your an awesome writer.
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