|Reviews for Daughter Of the Rogues|
| yami-no-kijo chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
Hey! Im a big fan of the story and im super happy u were able to continue it so quickly! However Im confused on some things. So I know that Aiyana is about 10 but what are the age differences between her and shikaku and kakashi and stuff? Also, it seemed like in this chapter that aiyana didnt know what to do in that kind of situation, but I thought that when she was growing up with her parents they would pretty much harshly train her in basic ninja skills. All the while attacking her outt the blue to get her to understand ninjas. I think im just confused why she just didnt do anything. And froze up. Is it because she has a lingering ptsd from when her parents were killed? And also it seemed like she didnt hate the village because of her quick reliance on her new team. I would think she would have trust issues or something. Especially considerig that the man who killed her parents is about to become hokage in a few years.
I guess I just am getting ahead of myself XD I just really wanna read more or the story haha. Especially to see what she finds out about konoha that makes her hate it again or atleast make what her parents warned her about true.
I really hope u dont think im flaming u or something im really not. I just have so many questions cuz i love the story so far. XD
Cant wait for the next chapter!
| MangekyoMarie chapter 7 . 6/25/2013
Why must you say the F-word in your notes? Anyway, cool chapter. Don't worry I didn't see anything that really needs to be edited. It was just very... short. Sadly short. Good yet short. This will be an interesting mission. Look forward to when you got time to update.
| MangekyoMarie chapter 6 . 6/25/2013
Awesome chapter, just give it a quick edit. There were a few errors in here that need a fixing. You got good pacing and a great plot, I hope the Uchiha train her. Keep up the great work and... Watch your language in your notes. Geez! Bad girl.
| ShadowBloodNinja chapter 7 . 6/25/2013
Im not logged in on my phone, sadly enough.
If i had been Aiyana, i'd have continued refusing. But im a stubborn bitch like that.
| Twinkie216 chapter 7 . 6/24/2013
Awesome chapter, but very short.
| Linda chapter 4 . 6/6/2013
Yesh, yesh indeed this story is awsome xD
Aiyana's awsome too :O
Criminal parents sure results in kickass/ badass kids! Cx
A big woohoo for the rainbow of awsomeness that led me to these stories
Entertain me more!
| MangekyoMarie chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
Awesome as always, grammar and spelling need a quick minor edit, but overall your description is excellent, plot is getting much more interesting and I can yet again say, you impress me. Keep up the good work, I know next chapter will be quite interesting. XD Oh and what? You have an internet problem? You left me, so email me on why you left! I love ya, keep on writing. :)
| ShadowBloodNinja chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
I would be like "FUCK YOU BITCH" To Kushina... but i'm a badass person and thats why.
Your last da of school is tomorrow? I'm jealous, i still ahve another MONTH.
| DarkChasm-Sama chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
This chapter was awesome, update soon. BTW is this how Tobi gets interested in her?
| MangekyoMarie chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
Very good, I love this story but I'm losing motivation to read for the lack of updates. Sorry. I have to read whole story to read this chapter. Maybe just me. You're a great writer, keep up the work. I hope to see this pick up over the summer.
| ShadowBloodNinja chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
I'd have killed everyone on a murderous rampage had i been her. No wait... well if my parents were cool like hers. My parents suck and i'd rejoice if they were killed by rogue ninja, yet we don't live in Naruto... so no.
I like it so far, better than the one that confuzzeled me.
| Uchiha Undead chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
I voted! And yes, this story is awesome! I can't wait for your next update! There some spelling errors, but very minor. :)
| Crystal Flower of Solitude chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
This is an awesome story! Please update soon.
| MangekyoMarie chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
What friend was supposed to betta this for you? I ALWAYS edit for you! :'(
lol... kidding and did you edit this? Seriously... You were half asleep weren't you? Sorries. You're not better yet? Shame on you. Get your ass online so we can chat, I have lots to talk about. Oh and great chapter btw, really well plotted. Wish was original and fix grammatical/spelling errors. Your talent on delivering a chapter still amazes me in the least. _
-Your best friend/Mama Marie
| angelofthelord15 chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Thanks for the update! :-) I would, have never seen kushina and Minato helping her. I wonder who killed her parents? please please please update! I want you to continue this story! hopefully, kisame will be in the next chapter! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)