Reviews for How to melt a heart of ice
Tee Hill chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
great chapter :)))))))))))))))))))))
wendy1969 chapter 6 . 7/2/2013
Should he not be thinking of her health instead of his own pleasure.

I am glad alice and jane were there to help her.
jmullinax chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
Great story so far please update soon
soagirlforever chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
please put up another chapter i can not wait to see what happens next i am glad though that alice and esme is there
KimberlyAnnT chapter 6 . 6/13/2013
but part of you will Bella..
Analitica chapter 6 . 6/12/2013
Wow poor bella. This is getting so good! I cannot wait to see more please update soon
slc6548 chapter 6 . 6/12/2013
Good chapter!
Legolas' Girl 31 chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
Awesome chapter.

victoria cullen35 chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and all at boy bella geting tern on by at oooooookkkkkkkkk boy marucs is being a pain in the butt in this story does konw at hes soul mate in this story man you think he would in love with her and geting to kown bella and all at and maybe have hot sex with bella and maybe get her brenget in this story man i dont think he gets it at all in this story big time
lundyred chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
poor Bella I really feel for her: She really can't really enjoy being beaten I hope that Marcus begins to care for her
Princess Mishawaka chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
Oh no Marcus is really scary, Even if Bella gets turned on by it, it's not worth it in the end because her body isn't made to be beaten on all the time.

I think Marcus really loves Bella though and will change to be her mate and care for her more than hurt her.
KEZZ 1 chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
Great start to your story i am looking forward to more
Babysis64 chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
oh no wow Bella sure keeps getting punished and poor Bella can't even leave the room now to me she is a slave and not a person or mate, she is imprisoned to have chains on her ankle and yes what is Marcus up to now. Thank you for the update it was good
toomanycats chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
yep you not going to like it
Lady Skyelite chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
He ought she was 'broken' when she arrived? He's going to end up destroying the very mate he wants so badly with his behavior towards her! Yes, she is his mate, but she isn't his dog, and he's treating her just like Edward did! I thought Marcus was a better man than that! Since Jasper knows emotions, and can tell him what she either can't or won't, maybe he should ask for Jasper's assistance with Bella! Jasper would make a good companion for her too, and at least Marcus would know that she is safe! What happened to Marcus, as Bella does wonder why he is treating her so cruelly and without any regard for her human state! No one has even tried to explain anything to her, and that is Marcus' fault for keeping her ignorant of how this works, my dear! She needs a tutor, someone to teach her about the world she is living in now, and the one that she will be in once she is turned. Not Alice, or Rose, or even Esme; Jasper and Caius are good candidates, but not Aro, he's too volatile in nature! I'm enjoying the story, but Bella needs to be a lot stronger, or she isn't going to live long enough for Marcus to claim! Thank you, Lady Skyelite.
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