Reviews for How to melt a heart of ice
slc6548 chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
Good chapter.
KimberlyAnnT chapter 5 . 5/22/2013
damn.. I'm not sure if I would be turned on or off either.
slc6548 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Looks good!
GUEST chapter 5 . 5/22/2013
OH GOD MARCUS IS SO HOT THIS WAY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!1
Sweet163 chapter 5 . 5/21/2013
I loved the chapter please update soon
Guest chapter 5 . 5/21/2013
Love it! More please
Babysis64 chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
oh this isn't good Bella needs to leave and hide some where she will be safe from Marcus and everyone else or just leave period especially if he is going to treat her like a slave and a no body wow that isn't right. well with this have a good week.
TillITryIllNeverKnow chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
This story should be one interesting ride! I wonder, over that year will Marcus cause Bella to be somewhat like himself? I'm looking forward to finding out.
Kimmie.Kitten1 chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
*Shivers* This story is good! It gives me shivers and now I need to know what happens next PLEASE!
Legolas' Girl 31 chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Awesome chapter.

Dani
Olivia Williams chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
oh Marcus seems like you will learn the hard way to hurt her is to hurt yourself silly vampire
xXxAllegraxXx chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Oh, this promises to be a very good and dark story...Dangerous and sadistic Marcus is very interesting and quite hot...! Will be a rough ride for Bella...
kirifox chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Will the Major get back into Marcus's good graces? Since Jasper is my favorite, especially in Major mode, I would hate to see him pushed aside. I have a feeling that he can be just as ruthless and sadistic as Marcus, which is why they get along and the Major thinks he can interfere where Bella is concerned. Although, he has been keeping her safe for the past year and that habit may be hard to break.
I love a weak, submissive Bella, especially when pair with a strong, dominant vampire. Should be interesting to see how sadistic he gets with her, because ultimately he loves her and needs to keep her safe enough to change her in a year or so. Maybe the Major will be the one he relies on to stop him, even if he takes his anger out on him later.
GUEST chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
I LOVE THE WAY YOU PORTRAY MARCUS!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Sally94 chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Loving this
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