Reviews for How to melt a heart of ice
Olivia Williams chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
oh Marcus seems like you will learn the hard way to hurt her is to hurt yourself silly vampire
xXxAllegraxXx chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Oh, this promises to be a very good and dark story...Dangerous and sadistic Marcus is very interesting and quite hot...! Will be a rough ride for Bella...
kirifox chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Will the Major get back into Marcus's good graces? Since Jasper is my favorite, especially in Major mode, I would hate to see him pushed aside. I have a feeling that he can be just as ruthless and sadistic as Marcus, which is why they get along and the Major thinks he can interfere where Bella is concerned. Although, he has been keeping her safe for the past year and that habit may be hard to break.
I love a weak, submissive Bella, especially when pair with a strong, dominant vampire. Should be interesting to see how sadistic he gets with her, because ultimately he loves her and needs to keep her safe enough to change her in a year or so. Maybe the Major will be the one he relies on to stop him, even if he takes his anger out on him later.
GUEST chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
I LOVE THE WAY YOU PORTRAY MARCUS!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Sally94 chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Loving this
Siobhan Whitlock chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Whoa! This was a great chapter! I loved the way you portrayed Marcus! :)

I do feel a bit sorry for the Major though... *looks at name* Obviously :)

I loved this!
lundyred chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
This Marcus is so different I'm scared for Bella
Analitica chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
this is so good and hot I can't wait for more update soon
Fullofpassion09 chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Is it that she is weak minded or that male vampires are so dominate and add that to her mate enjoying others pain?!
toomanycats chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
maybe he don't need a mate then
Hiskia chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
great story so far
Princess Mishawaka chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
I do like a strong Bella but I love anything you write so I am reading this story with the knowledge that Marcus is a sadist and Bella is his mate so she must learn humility and know what he wants before she is punished.

I am surprised that Carlisle gave in so quickly but then he claims to be a pacifist and used that to cover his cowardice.

You are an awesome author and I will wait patiently for an update.
fallunder chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
I don't have a problem w/ Bella being weak minded. However reading about Marcus's sadistic feelings toward Bella doesn't work for me. Did enjoy Marcus choking Jasper. Good luck w/ the story. Your writing flows nicely.
Jenniemarie Elizabeth Cullen chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Please update soon :)
lundyred chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
love it can't wait for more
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