|Reviews for Sometimes|
| Anonymous chapter 9 . 5/28
I just got Jump-Scared by a static text document.
Lovely writing, anon
| GravityTonttu chapter 20 . 5/17
I don't know how to describe the experience of reading this story, except that I was addicted to it and it got my brain running circles around itself... So congratulations on developing a damn good narcotic in text form!
| Brenden chapter 20 . 5/14
incredible. this is worthy of bioshock, you mind game master.
| Laurel Keeper chapter 2 . 4/14
Holy cow. That last part! It made my heart jump into my throat!
| Thean Crow chapter 11 . 3/20
holy...shit. is booker...jack...and is delta...both of them!?
| Thean Crow chapter 10 . 3/20
oh, i was hoping to see some romance with that dimension jumper.
| Thean Crow chapter 8 . 3/20
damnit, now i'm thinking about cosplaying anna.
| Averant chapter 20 . 1/27
I don't know what the hell I just read, and I think I hurt my brain doing it, but...
Good job anyway!
But seriously, my brain hurts. I need an aspirin...
| ForgottenPrince chapter 20 . 1/23
Wow, that was one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. The ending was a bit lacking though, I would of thought you would of had the twins meeting booker and such. Amazing story, keep it up.
| Neospace122 chapter 20 . 12/10/2014
This was amazing.
Im not smart, but i did understand most of this great story.
the whole "Is the universe really that old?" thing at the end.
PURE CONCENTRATED MINDF&CK
I, just one of the many mindless masses of this world, tip my hat to you good sir.
The Ending of BI was always a sticking point for me, but after i played the game again (And with using a chart) i was able to understand and applaud the story.
the fact that you took it even FURTHER?
I've read all of your Naruto, Harry Potter, and Your FOZ, Just started Dark Wings Too.
Even if it might be from one person in a sea of 7 billion, I know that your fics touch the realism, the grit, the triumph, and the fall.
May your Fics inspire a new generation of readers and writers...
YOU GLORIOUS F&CKING BASTARD
YOU AMAZING WRITER YOU!
| Demon Lord Cashmere Snow chapter 20 . 12/5/2014
Well written, the execution was lovely. What really did it for me was the conclusion, the note of finality and the vibe that pronounces the story over.
| Paradox Dreams chapter 20 . 9/17/2014
What a terrific story.
| wingofpain chapter 20 . 9/9/2014
I really like this fic.
| Von chapter 2 . 8/16/2014
Just a heads up, the bit with the kid's ball and undertow (cool idea by the way) seems to be missing some text.
| Driger117 chapter 20 . 8/9/2014
the ending i felt wasn't great but it was adequate.
However the story itself was top notch