Reviews for In Pursuit
blb1000 chapter 16 . 9/4/2015
After recently reading drotuno's Gravity series, I'm pro helicopter in security situations. Seems an apartment with a helipad & flying to the courthouse helipad would be so much safer than any vehicle.
blb1000 chapter 15 . 9/4/2015
I don't Deedee why they'd have to stay in NYC after they testify. Going while court was in session could give them an advantage.
blb1000 chapter 14 . 9/3/2015
I think they need one large or 2 small plastic bulletproof bubbles for walking into court. It would stop the Volturi men in their tracks because they'd be totally stymied.
blb1000 chapter 12 . 9/2/2015
Good story about Maggie. His attitude makes more sense now.
blb1000 chapter 11 . 9/2/2015
This chapter reminded me that I need to reread the original books again. I think it's been a year or two?
blb1000 chapter 10 . 9/2/2015
Assward prevails.
blb1000 chapter 9 . 9/2/2015
Seems they could still have trouble in Forks if someone recognizes Ed & then questions who the girls are.
blb1000 chapter 7 . 8/31/2015
I'd think it better to blend in with the neighbors than act unfriendly. Ed's jealousy was clearly getting the best of him.
blb1000 chapter 6 . 8/31/2015
They were dumb not to check the car for bugs before going back to the house.
blb1000 chapter 5 . 8/31/2015
Seems that regardless of their names, they'd still be in danger if caught with the two Feds. Plus, they havnt changed how they look.
blb1000 chapter 4 . 8/30/2015
These two are reminding me of the beginning of the Gravity series.
blb1000 chapter 3 . 8/30/2015
Riley was definitely dirty.
blb1000 chapter 2 . 8/30/2015
That would be a biotch. Having to drop everything and possibly be fine for months. They don't get money for lux accommodations either.
Fanfic lover chapter 36 . 8/27/2015
Loved, loved, loved! Perfect story!
juicytreat2 chapter 36 . 8/27/2015
Just finished this awesome story. I could not put it down. Lost sleep but it was worth it! Loved MarshalWard! Great story and ooooh those lemons were so darn good! Awesome job!
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