Reviews for In Pursuit
blb1000 chapter 32 . 9/7/2015
I'm going to miss your Uncle Al character. ;)
blb1000 chapter 31 . 9/7/2015
Poor Jess. She'll have to transfer her feelings to another dude in the office.
blb1000 chapter 27 . 9/6/2015
That was the ultimate payback with Maggie ...and Randy.
blb1000 chapter 26 . 9/6/2015
I thought she have interaction with Carl at the hospital even before meeting Edward.
blb1000 chapter 25 . 9/6/2015
At least she has balls. ;P
blb1000 chapter 24 . 9/6/2015
I guess the Ladybug baby clothes would have been too far fetched for bachelorward to give his niece.
blb1000 chapter 23 . 9/5/2015
I have a feeling they'll be their own worst enemies for awhile.
blb1000 chapter 22 . 9/5/2015
Neighbors well see them moving in with the guys helping. Not exactly adding to the "we just met" story line.
blb1000 chapter 21 . 9/5/2015
Hmmm. Now they collect their stuff in Forks, move to Seattle, meet the family, etc.
blb1000 chapter 19 . 9/5/2015
The V know they're still in town though, so any move outside the apartment, for any if the four, could still be deadly. :(
blb1000 chapter 18 . 9/4/2015
That was close!
blb1000 chapter 17 . 9/4/2015
Poor Iverson is a new name and those characters are often sacrificed. It's a little odd that he volunteered so late. Don't think they'd ever make such a late change in RL.
blb1000 chapter 16 . 9/4/2015
After recently reading drotuno's Gravity series, I'm pro helicopter in security situations. Seems an apartment with a helipad & flying to the courthouse helipad would be so much safer than any vehicle.
blb1000 chapter 15 . 9/4/2015
I don't Deedee why they'd have to stay in NYC after they testify. Going while court was in session could give them an advantage.
blb1000 chapter 14 . 9/3/2015
I think they need one large or 2 small plastic bulletproof bubbles for walking into court. It would stop the Volturi men in their tracks because they'd be totally stymied.
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