Reviews for In Pursuit
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25
Uncle Al is a wise man.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/25
Thank you.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/25
Oh, the burn...the burn.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/24
Fast paced, holds the interest.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
Once again, amazed by the male (Edward) point of view. You really nail it.
letmein123 chapter 1 . 6/29
Just found this story- on chapter 3 - love you ladies stories- am already loving this one- more, more uuuuuuuhhhhhhh :-)
ellekat08 chapter 36 . 6/24
Loved this story reading it in 2015 but I truly enjoyed it Edward so adorable with ladybug And loved uncle Al it was just perfect.
You are awesome chapter 4 . 5/8
I keep seeing Ben and Angales son Daniel being mentioned and how sad they where but what about his babysitter wasn't she killed aswell but I do love this story
You are awesome
Caz1234 chapter 34 . 5/3
Excellent all round. Really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to your next fic now xx
JanuaryLestrange chapter 11 . 4/13
I'm a fan of the slow burn. :)
84gemstone chapter 25 . 4/9
Why couldn't Edward take ladybug and spend the day with Bella? I get why he didn't say I love you just cause someone else did. It needs to be special but I don't think he should of run.
84gemstone chapter 8 . 4/8
Bella's home Florida. Why would people even think to look for them there? Loving the story and the kiss ;)
jennykate chapter 36 . 4/4
Another great story, girls! You guys always write a super hot Edward. Marshalward did not disappoint! Thanks so much for sharing your words! XOXO, Jenny Kate
84gemstone chapter 2 . 4/4
If it wasn't out about the witnesses why did someone break into Mary's apartment? I get its out now but that little bit was bugging me lol. Will they get new names in witsec or after the case is closed?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 36 . 4/2
You ladies rock!
Any chance of further collaborations?!
*biting my lip in hopeful anticipation*
*huggles you both*
Mary xo
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