Reviews for In Pursuit
Newbeginning91 chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
Wow amazing
AceSunshine chapter 15 . 7/5/2013
Love uncle Al.
How are they ever going to hide their attraction for one another when they are in NY? I don't think it is going to be possible.
I would be totally freaking as much as Bella is about returning for the trial. Those mafia boys are relentless.
SLKerouac chapter 15 . 7/4/2013
Bella is still with Edward in his room. Bella wakes up to just look at Edward sleeping but he asks her what she is thinking so hard about. They cuddle and it leads to other things. Edward wanted to hear about Bella's life. He had her tell him about things that happened, what her parents were like and what they had done together. Edward had told Bella that she was the one for him and that he would protect her. Jasper is knocking on Edward's door wondering where Bella was. Edward hoped that Bella and him would be able to spend the day together in bed but he told Jasper that Bella was with him and that they would be out soon. They cleaned up and went out. They had lunch. Alice told Bella that she needed to talk with her. They went up to Bella's room and talked. Alice asked what happened. Bella told her about the nightmare and how she had to see for herself that Edward was ok. Then Alice asked about what else happened. Bella told her and that she loved being with Edward but that she was so afraid of what would happen after the trial. Was he just telling her things or did he really mean them. Alice told her that if Edward told her something that he meant it. That he would not lie to her. That made Bella feel better. For the past two weeks Bella has been having nightmares. She has been staying with Edward but still having nightmares. This morning Edward had gone for his run and was taking a shower. He was finishing and heard Bella. He went over there to wake her up again. They teased each other and then Bella told him that she needed a shower. Edward went out for breakfast. Jasper was cooking. Bella came out and sat to eat and then the alarm went off. The boys had the girls go to the garage and be quiet. Jasper and Edward were armed. When Edward looked out he saw that it was Uncle Al. He came in and Edward got the girls. They were sitting in the kitchen. Al was trying to lighten this up but it really didn't work. He gave Edward the folder. It was everything that was needed for their trip and stay in New York. He talked about where they were going, how and who was secure. He told Bella and Alice about what the attorneys were going to do prior to the trial and what they would be doing. Al told Jasper and Edward that they would be in the court room in full attire. Then told them that there were rumors that Felix and the DA were trying to make a deal. If that happens the focus will be off of the girls but that no one will know till during the trial. Edward thinks that could start a mob war but Uncle Al doesn't seem too concerned now. Al wanted to talk with Edward alone. He told him about Rose and his parents. He also wanted to give him advice that he needed to be professional in New York so that no one knew about his feelings for Bella. Al left telling Edward that he would call in a couple of days. Bella came out and wanted to know if he was ok and that she needed help against Alice and Jasper in the video game. Does Edward sit everyone down and let them know that everything has to be professional in New York? Will Bella and Alice go along with everything? What do they all want after the trial? How will Bella handle New York? Do they get to the apartment without any problems? Will they all get to the court house without any problems? Will there be a deal with Felix? Will the girls have to testify? What happens before they leave Forks? Next chapter!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/2/2013
post the next chapter soon! you are truly an awesome kickass writer! omfg .. just simply amazing dont let anyone tell you different! _ keep up the awesome work! 3 ya

LillianBroderick chapter 15 . 7/4/2013
Another amazing chapter. The tension is mounting! A little scared about the trial.
parash chapter 15 . 7/3/2013 much worrying, so much riding on new york...
looking forward to more
hopefully soon yeah?

all I keep thinking is Edward saying, "in house, outhouse and under every nook and cranny" know from the fugitive. love that movie!
stephi910 chapter 15 . 7/3/2013
good chapter, looking forward to the next one
3diamonds chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Nice start!
divyvicki chapter 4 . 7/2/2013
In really enjoying this story.
OhGeeFantasy chapter 15 . 7/2/2013
Excited for more!
KClaughs chapter 15 . 7/2/2013
Awesome! I would love a PM teaser!
Rebadams7 chapter 15 . 7/2/2013
Tick tock. It's getting tense
sholtsclaw698 chapter 15 . 7/2/2013
love the chapter! and Edward has a lot on his shoulders... his very broad... muscular... shoulders. can't wait for the next one!
OhGeeFantasy chapter 12 . 7/2/2013
Loving the story! The only thing I can say about the Hot Chocolate is...can I have the recipe? Lol. I drink it year round:) I'm so into this story that I can't put it down. Thx:)
jwevans chapter 15 . 7/2/2013
Great chapter. All of your characters are do easy to visualize. I can't wait until Sunday. Thanks so much for writing!
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