|Reviews for Deliverance|
| Ziodyne967 chapter 10 . 1/20
Still waiting on that next chapter...
| Ilsihndira chapter 10 . 1/5
Oh...my...word! How I adore this story! I finished this in one sitting- and I feel like rereading it too! I can't tell you how mouthwateringly addicting this is...you've captured every character so perfectly and there has not been a dull moment at all! It felt like you were writing me through Tharja's eyes...I know you're busy, but I'm begging you...please continue this masterpiece. Please?
| Han-Ko chapter 10 . 12/26/2013
Such a nice fic, I will wait for the update
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Please continue this is a fabulous expansion into their supports and is faithful and creative.
| Blinded in a bolthole chapter 10 . 10/17/2013
After an almost randomly posted pic in thread of another, rather unrelated story to FE, I decided to check on ff's pieces and found this one. Good read this far. Hope you keep it up!
| Number I of the Tri-blade chapter 10 . 8/29/2013
What can I say about this that hasn't already be said? Well for starters I think you capture both characters quite perfectly. In the game, Robin is pretty much a blank slate in more ways than one, but I think you capture what little personality he had quite well and expand it. Tharja seems quite true to character as well, although she does seem a tad less...intimidating? Perhaps that what I'm going for, but that simply from getting such a great insight in to her mind.
Overall great writing, maybe a tad overstretched at times. I think you could have done without, or at least shortened, the first part of this chapter with Chrom gearing up for war. It didn't seem to really add all that much to the story given the length of it. Other than I'd just suggest once you finish writing to read over your chapters. There's nothing big as far as grammatical errors, a missing word here or there is all.
Anyways keep up the good work. Can't wait to see where you take this.
| Salty chapter 10 . 8/25/2013
Whoah, I love your characterization of Tharja and how her obsessive nature, while single minded and unhealthy, is not portrayed in a way that mocks or demeans her. Your Robin is also really great - true to the avatar's gentle but practical characterization, with an adorable streak of cluelessness. But yeah, most of my love is for Tharja. I hope she gets her happy ending, even if she has to go through a bunch of hard realizations first. Looking forward to the rest of the story!
| Ascarde chapter 10 . 8/21/2013
One of the best Robin fics I've read, and I've read Potentia Amoris. Well done; the character development is a little character heavy in terms of Tharja, and I still feel as if there's little focus on Robin, but you've done really well in terms of getting the mood and the characters. You can even manage to fit the Support conversations in, and it doesn't feel weird or out of place at all.
You've earned a new follower to the story.
| Ascarde chapter 8 . 8/21/2013
Both kingdoms and armies are run by their stomachs. Food should not be passed up when offered.
| Dane Namor chapter 10 . 8/7/2013
Stumbled upon this story earlier, read the whole thing in one burst. Absolutely loved it.
One of the absolute best Robin/Tharja stories I've read so far, a very interesting way to get into why she loves him and some of the reasoning behind her actions.
I actually particularly liked the reason you gave for her enigmatic "I thought you'd be grateful" line myself, but yes, great story, I'm excited to see where you take it. Looking forward to more.
| Gunlord500 chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
Time for those chapter by chapter reviews I promised ya...I've kept it off for too long. I continue to enjoy your depiction of Tharja, both in terms of her progressing feelings towards Robin and little things, like her disdain for the cold. These lil touches give your fic an edge compared to others, IMO :D
| draugeltheshadowhero chapter 10 . 7/21/2013
I quite enjoy this story, if you have any DLC/Xenologues you could use some of it to explain some advances or you could have the paralogues do the same, unless you aim to have only the main story line when you need to.
Anyway that's just my opinion just trowing it out to you.
| TheSmirkingSnake chapter 10 . 7/15/2013
Hey there! Gotta say, I really like how you've written this story. I especially like the way you portray Tharja. She is as Robin and hex obsessed as she should be, but you deliver a more in-depth feel for the character that I love :)
I also like how you portray Robin's reaction to the whole situation. After all, someone who's memory is so messed up that they just barely remembered their name is not going to know the first thing about dealing with love. So, in short, amazing work, and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
And so, The Snake watches the ominous clouds of an uncertain future, with a kindly smirk
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/14/2013
| TheGreatTactician chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
Amazing chapter man! Also, I like the retelling part of the story. It gives it much more depth. I've just gotta say I love what you've done with this story man! You've done such a good job humanizing Tharja. Everyone thinks she's creepy and mean, but no one ever seems to see her good side. Also, could you just write all of the support conversations for the Fire Emblem company? Seriously, the ingame support conversations for Robin and Tharja were so rushed, but so far you've paced it out nicely. Anyways, I've said a lot, haha! Great job and I can't wait for tne next chapter!