Reviews for Unexpected
meh Jasminwilso chapter 12 . 5/25/2013
Hey i loved the story sad its over but i loved it!
Guest chapter 12 . 5/22/2013
That was a great ending. I feel at ease now, like it's all been finished up
Guest chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
This story is rushed. It reads like an expanded outline with minimal detail. The concept is good but the execution needs some work.
LillyZ chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
It's not shit, it's cute! What you wrote about Renesmee and EJ was absolutely adorable. And I like the way you ended tje story with the name and a bit of a twist to it (I happened to have done that with one of my own non-fanfiction related stories)...
Good luck with your other stories and whatever is comming up next!
LillyZ
Notinusedeletedaccountsorry chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
I loved it! i loved this story! hope you start another!
bluepenguin218 chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
This epioluge is not shit and thanks soo much for the mention
StephD21 chapter 11 . 5/18/2013
I can't wait to read what happens! hope u update soon! :D
LillyZ chapter 11 . 5/14/2013
Ohhhh! Thar's so sweet! Will you write an epilouge to this to wrap things up and tie loose ends (like Edward's reaction to his kids, for example)?
Guest chapter 11 . 5/14/2013
You'd better have a pretty good, extensive epilogue as I will not allow you to just leave it there. You have an amazing story here and you're an amazing writer! Please add more, please?
bluepenguin218 chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
Awesomeeeeee
Alexa Twilight chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
YA THEY FOUND OUT
Notinusedeletedaccountsorry chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
Awww! Great Chapter!
jasminwilson12 chapter 10 . 5/5/2013
The next chappeter should be about how it a year or two latter and then they go to the cullens and have a lovely talk. I love this story great job!
StephD21 chapter 10 . 5/4/2013
Great story! Can't wait to read more! :)
Alexa Twilight chapter 9 . 5/4/2013
:)
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