|Reviews for Unexpected|
| meh Jasminwilso chapter 12 . 5/25/2013
Hey i loved the story sad its over but i loved it!
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/22/2013
That was a great ending. I feel at ease now, like it's all been finished up
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
This story is rushed. It reads like an expanded outline with minimal detail. The concept is good but the execution needs some work.
| LillyZ chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
It's not shit, it's cute! What you wrote about Renesmee and EJ was absolutely adorable. And I like the way you ended tje story with the name and a bit of a twist to it (I happened to have done that with one of my own non-fanfiction related stories)...
Good luck with your other stories and whatever is comming up next!
| Beverly Marie chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
I loved it! i loved this story! hope you start another!
| bluepenguin218 chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
This epioluge is not shit and thanks soo much for the mention
| Stephanie Dainiak Cullen chapter 11 . 5/18/2013
I can't wait to read what happens! hope u update soon! :D
| LillyZ chapter 11 . 5/14/2013
Ohhhh! Thar's so sweet! Will you write an epilouge to this to wrap things up and tie loose ends (like Edward's reaction to his kids, for example)?
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/14/2013
You'd better have a pretty good, extensive epilogue as I will not allow you to just leave it there. You have an amazing story here and you're an amazing writer! Please add more, please?
| bluepenguin218 chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
| Alexa Twilight chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
YA THEY FOUND OUT
| Beverly Marie chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
Awww! Great Chapter!
| jasminwilson12 chapter 10 . 5/5/2013
The next chappeter should be about how it a year or two latter and then they go to the cullens and have a lovely talk. I love this story great job!
| Stephanie Dainiak Cullen chapter 10 . 5/4/2013
Great story! Can't wait to read more! :)
| Alexa Twilight chapter 9 . 5/4/2013