Was that the end or will there be more?

Nice update.

I'm crazy about this story line. Looking forward to another amazing installment, hopefully quickly. Kissinghollie

Yehoo! I practically did a happy jig when i saw that you updated! Well, i just hope that all that ships didn't sinks like the titanic instead it comes out strong even when a huge iceberg crashes into it. That jori scene literally gives me the fluff and warms my heart. I also wanna read the horror story that jade told them. Thanks and ciao

Please update this! You promised not to leave it unfinished! I love this story and i want to see a happy jori ending! Onegai, author-san!

I'm glad you decided not to leave them in the woods. I'll be waiting to see where this leads. Enjoy the rewrite, and the rest of the year.

i love the chapter and cant wait till you resume

So they finally discover the truth. It will be interesting to see how David will react when Tori and Jade finally discover their feelings with one another. Poor Tori, but hopefully the misunderstanding and confusion will be solved soon. Will their be more interaction with Tori, Pablo, Doc, etc. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Things are getting complicated. Will Jade and tori be lovers, or sisters? We will find out.

Cat's found an interesting way to sell Gatorade. Jade is a good sales pitch.

good work on the new chapter and nice twist with their mothers, cant wait for the next release

Nice update. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Trina is short for Katrina, so this whole name thing is getting kind of freaky. I guess it's something to focus on as I unravel the complex relationships between Jade's family and friends. Or I could just let it go and enjoy the show.

Nice update. Can't wait to see the next update but sad to see it will be awhile before that happens next.

I can't wait to see how the whole tango thing will go lol. As for the mystery child, it seems a bit unusual for the plot but if executed nicely it could very well fit in well with the plot. Either way can't wait to see what you will do.

Stories do that, run away. I'm likeing the developments. It seems that Jade and Tori have a history. Jade's extended family is interesting as well. I guess this will make more sense later. Once you write it, and the story lets you know what it wants to say.