Reviews for Home Free
PhantomCielo27 chapter 4 . 6/10
Absolutely love love loved this story! Can't wait for Ace and Luffy to meet *snicker* it'll be awesome! And will Luffy and his crew become pirates instead of marines? Excited for when Smokey will show up and ooh! What of Shanks? Will Luffy ever get his Straw Hat? And is Sabo alive? So many questions. So many awesome feels for this superb story, not enough chapters! It is simply stuff endous your writing style and I am in love! Pleas eupdate soon!
Someoen chapter 4 . 5/4
If you aren't ever going to update either delete or pass it on to someone who will update.
ingol chapter 4 . 2/5
This is a good read. I love how you made Luffy and co. fit into the positions of marines so well without changing their core characteristics! :)
AzureLazuli chapter 4 . 8/9/2016

Seriously, I love how you take the characters we all know and love and stick them in this marine base, while keeping their personalities true to form and backstories similar yet different enough for there to be MYSTERY and PLOT. Those Whitebeard pirates don't know what they've got themselves into. ;)

But really, what happened that was so traumatizing in Dressrosa? Why doesn't Ace know that Luffy's on base, or possibly even alive? What is Luffy's goal in even being a marine? Why was CP9 dispatched and what are they looking for, aside from Thatch? And sooo many more questions besides! :D

I still hold hope that one day the fires of inspiration might spring forth once again. But until that day, I shall reread this fic and analyze it in hopes of new insights. May your stories bring you as much joy in their writing as I had reading them.
MyAnimeObsession chapter 4 . 7/28/2016
Interesting plot, would really like to see more updates!
Wondering how the crew will react upon finding out that Ace is Luffy's brother. Also, hehehe Luffy is the one, as Thatch would say, 'fangirling' over Ace ;)
Marco leaving Ace behind is funny too
babayaga89 chapter 4 . 7/24/2016
update pretty please? D
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 4 . 5/10/2016
You have an excellent set-up for some epic chaos going here. You can practically feel breeze of the fan blades and the smell of the excrement moments from demise and spray. Defintely looking forward to the next chapter of this and the probable excitement likely to be involved. Thank you for writing and posting these first few chapters!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/23/2016
I literally need the next chapter or for you to give this story to someone who will continue it
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 4 . 4/17/2016
Very good
the trash chapter 4 . 3/5/2016
plz update
calypso tchaka chapter 4 . 2/28/2016
how is it that I can practically TASTE the chaos and derailment of plans that's JUST AROUND THE CORNER...maybe if I could sprout flower-eyes like Robin I could SPY THE REST!

Hahahaha oh dear CP9 incoming and arrived, and the guide is hilarious I would have at least given the guy a laugh I mean come on, that commentary is pretty steady and pretty informative. hahahaha and pirate hunter hunting and franky being all SUPPERR with Nico doing her own spy-thing. Aw...And Ace is right there. Going to eat something (probably) and meeting his little brother doing his one of his favourite things (eating)...and chaos and everything happening and Ace being big brotherly and LUFFY BEING RIGHT and everything SOMEHOW working out.

I. Am. Missing. Out.


At least I not be the only one me hearty. (ooooo srsly it is late and wow late night reviewing probably shouldn't be a thing but IT IS NOW) danmit. hiatus. bleh


missing out on awesomeness here. . . your computer probably ate it and fused didn't it? one time I switched mine on (this was years ago though to be fair) AND SMOKE CAME OUT and died. yours probably died. I feel for you...(waiting for the cat to come backkkkk so I can close the dooooor) trying to search for a BLACK cat at night just isn't happening and its being a ninja.

So anyway. Loved it. Still do actually. Your story (obviously Ilove my cat I am Waiting aren't I). His name is Zorro...he was named before I got into OP. FYI.

loved it. bye
calypso tchaka chapter 2 . 2/28/2016
BON-CHAN! Rules! Absolutely! hahahahaha no contest! I LOVE BON-CHAN! He is one of my favourite characters! And oooohhhhhh! Is this then in some way a plot of the Revolutionaries to give Luffy a kick in the rear to get away and explore in his adventurous pirate-way? (ah damn, only 2 more chapters to go and I saw on your profile page this is on hiatus...wwhhyyyyyyyyy? you are such an amazingly awesome-sauce writer that's just doing the EPIC thang right here) *sobs* /turns page

I LOVE your writing. It must be said. And I don't know if you still write or are even still alive and kicking and still an OP fan (cause this manga/anime is amaze-balls truly Oda is Genius), but please accept this compliment: this is a fantastic story. If you aren't feeling it anymore, its a pity. But you've stated something wonderful. *complement compliment hug*
calypso tchaka chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
LOVED this chapter! You write so wonderfully, I truly enjoyed reading this. Sanji was described wonderfully and Usopp is the Ultimate Secretary well done! It was good to read how everyone worried for Luffy and clearly not everything is strictly to marine regulations! Robin is there. Really good. Thanks, onward to the next chapter
Lighted Candle chapter 4 . 2/9/2016
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
This is easily the best MarineLuffy fic that I have found, and I started looking after reading this to see if there was anything else good:

-Luffy does not start off as a commodore or higher when he meets his crew at the beginning, and is instead closer to their strength
-Luffy's basic personality is unchanged thanks to the brilliant way you used Kuma, while also actually giving an explanation for him becoming a marine besides using his grandpa as an excuse
-showing the marines in a more favourable light compared to pirates for once. Or rather, the marines are not all bloodthirsty idiots, and the pirates are actually dangerous criminals. That said, your comparison and contrast in this chapter was very accurate and good
-nice use of Drake, first story I found where he was still a marine which I guess we can put down to Luffy's influence (hope to see that). Also, unlike other fics we are not automatically seeing Smoker here
-Luffy having to control his appetite

Please write more!
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