|Reviews for Home Free|
| Frostyfall chapter 4 . 6/12
okay, you NEED to keep writing the next chapter. I don't mean I WANT you to keep writing the next chapter. I NEED YOU TO UPDATE SOON OKAY?
| Shimbashi chapter 4 . 6/12
Very mysterious & overhelming plot about Luffy-Marine. I wanna continuation! PLEASE! please! e!
| Hakuei Shirei chapter 4 . 4/17
This story is amazing so far! Can't wait to see what happens! Just wait til Ace learns that its Luffy's place he's invading, lol! Seriously, can't wait, this is great!
| bakasaru264 chapter 4 . 4/16
Eeeeh you stopped there? I'm sorry I don't mean to complain after you have updated with so much going on in your life but... Please! Please don't abandon this!
| bakasaru264 chapter 1 . 4/16
This is one intersting story about Luffy the marine. I hope you still have Ace and Luffy and Sabo as brother because I am a big fan of ASL.
| like2314 chapter 4 . 4/5
update update i want to see ace and luffy do it for the fans
| Ruritto chapter 4 . 4/3
Ahhh this is amazing! I really enjoyed reading it and hopefully it hasn't been abandoned OTL
| Inkwell of Stars chapter 4 . 3/30
Wow this is great. Luffy as a marine, but with his convictions and his nakama, is such an interesting idea.
Thanks for the lovely story!
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/19
| Marion chapter 4 . 1/30
Vivement la suite !
| Mad Y u e chapter 1 . 1/11
Oh, no. I've just re-read this and omg is so hilarious sjsbxjsbsbdhd i freaking love it
THIS NEED AN UPDATE, PLEASEH. -Rolls in the floor- please please pleaseeeee3
No matter how many times i read it, it always make me laugh. But some scenes are just so funnydhs like Ace's big idea, or Marco's curse (i cant take him too seriously with the yoi, i love it gdi), Ace's excuse ('swimming'), THE RIVER WITH NO FISH AJDJSSJS, and all the strawhat crew behavior. Its so perfect.
Again, thank you for writing this 3
| AzureSea8 chapter 4 . 1/3
This is soooooo exciting!
| freeze47458 chapter 4 . 12/11/2014
Please update the story again soon!
| CeKhay chapter 4 . 11/30/2014
I'm just so curious with how fine a line Luffy seems to be playing with being a Marine and wanting to be free on the sea. And how he managed to keep all his nakama with him cooped up in that marine base. And now I remember that yes Luffy and Ace do know each other, but then how did Ace no see that Luffy became a Marine? Or that he's sneaking into the base Luffy's commander of? So many questions I just want to know the answers to. Because really if life great joys are in the way, I would really appreciate just a summery outline to the end. :D
P.S Seriously summery outline.
P.S.S Really though
P.S.S Much Appreciated
| CeKhay chapter 3 . 11/30/2014
So sidenote do Luffy and Ace know each other back from the Blue Sea? Or is that going to be a big plot point? If you've given up on finishing this I really could just use a summary or outline so I can have closure. Closure is great...