Reviews for Candles
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 7/16
MRMenaMRM chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Aw! Yet another sad story but such a good ending!:) That is so true what you wrote and Gohan made Videl realize that which is so cute!:P haha so now Videls has a happy memory thank you Gohan right? Lol well loved this!:D
SkyrimQueen28 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
This is one of the best stories I've read on here. I love it so much.
HaylesHayles chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
That was really something else.
Gohan's perspective is helpful. I suffered a loss and I'm still not over it, but I too like to recall all the happy and crazy memories, because they make me smile, even though they kind of hurt pretty bad from time to time.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I liked it a lot.
BeastModeNMS chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Well that was very thought provoking. I really liked it. Not much to say. You were in point with the emotions.
Borderlined Innocence chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
o.O don't you hate it when someone says something so easily that you've struggled to figure out for what feels like an eternity... I also hate it when you learn about things like this the hard way... But you've done amazingly well in describing such a horrible loss, from multiple points of view. :)

NerdsRule chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Wow, this was super sweet. This depressed me for a little while, but as you gradually revealed more and more about Gohan and Videl, it made me happier to be reading what I view as a borderline masterpiece. Phenomenal job.

I've really enjoyed both of your one shots, please keep writing stories. Original plots, superb detail, and, of course, the best DBZ couple out there :D

Great story.
retta2002 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
i can feel what both characters have, my dad died of lung cancer when i was seven
SierraLarson chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I SHOULDN'T HAVE READ THIS AFTER WATCHING PUELLA MAGI MADOKA MAGICA ;-; My feelings... I guess you could say are more pron to sadness? Or I dunno how to describe that but yeah this fic was kind of sad but also really cute because it's like he cheered her up so much and I dunno but KAWAII DESUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
A-arbor chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
A few things...again. For the fiftieth time.
1. I am not stupid! Or perverted! Or insensitive!
2. Ok so I sort of am...
3. Great story!
4. Write more!
Shank-GxV chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Another great one shot. I hope you will write a multi chapter fic like Two Words: Gohan & Videl :-)
SenpaiGabby chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Simple and sweet. I like the way you introduced Gohans feelings and later on just once telling the reader she felt the same way. You seem to always get the characters perfect with slightly cocky Videl and sweet little Gohan. Can't wait for more. Pm me if u need anything
dcp1992 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Another great oneshot! Loved the detail you put in on the Videl parts and about her mother. Also love the conversation between Gohan and Videl. It was sweet. Great ending too. Cannot wait to read another Gohan/Videl story from you, and maybe a multi chapter sometime too!
TheOneAndOnly123 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I cried. This is such a great fanfic. I love it so much. Great job. :)
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