|Reviews for Losing Control|
| Heksy chapter 15 . 4/24
Amazing work. Well thought out and a refreshing outlook on revenge.
| Heksy chapter 3 . 4/20
Will you stop apologising already? Your writing is fine, your story is fine, your grammar is FINE! Pshhh...those so-called critics might want to stick a hand in their own bosom. Are they all university English professors or something? *snorts* yeah right, that's why they spend their time reading fanfiction. Come on now, southerners are also known for their character. Show them your teeth, hun *winks*
| Calebros chapter 15 . 4/12
Great story, but you kind of ignored the fact the Hermione was under the control (compulsion charm) of the Headmaster until the Yule Ball in 4th year.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/6
I just realized cedric is going to die i really hope you don't kill him
| pinky9292 chapter 15 . 3/31
| Deathmvp chapter 15 . 3/23
Great work on this story it was a great one.
| tcl7189 chapter 15 . 3/15
Interesting wrap up.. Good job!
| Gleas chapter 15 . 3/5
Outstanding! I can't believe you managed to pack so much drama into what is effectively an epilogue lol Although... I expected Minnie to be better as se didn't have Albus around but... -shrugs-
| Gleas chapter 8 . 3/5
I'm with Harry on the Krum issue... at least a jinx that makes it painful to... uh... do it?
| Kisaki Sakura chapter 15 . 2/23
A good story, even if there were a few facts that seem to be added afterwards.
I especially liked the OOC Luna.
Good work, well done.
| doRodrigo chapter 15 . 2/18
| weasleyginny01 chapter 15 . 2/15
wow I really loved this story.
| missgsmith51 chapter 9 . 2/8
Your third task and graveyard scenes were certainly interesting and somewhat different from the usual. I'm surprised to see Fudge behaving as though he has a modicum of intelligence and integrity. Those are not normally character qualities I think of in connection with him. Generally he seems incapable of making a decision - even a poor one - unless he has Lucius or Umbridge guiding him. Perhaps the other two ministers are having a positive influence on him. I suppose I should wait, though, because there are still five chapters remaining for him to revert to his usual asinine behavior.
I like the evil cliffie. Well, not really; but when one is frustrated with a cliffhanger, doesn't that mean it is a good one?
| Goose chapter 1 . 1/23
Please pick another plot device to use. We all know you hate Dumbledore, and certain Weasleys. Try writing something where they AREN'T bashed to oblivion...I bet you can't lol.
| AliB1149 chapter 10 . 1/12
Yea. :) Stargate reference in Ch 10. Normally I wait until the end to review but I love Stargate as much as HP so big grin for this chapter from me. :D