You may not be a "polished writer", but you are doing a great job on this excellent story. You are streets ahead of many other authors as all of your stories are complete, many of whom I cannot even understand. I

...the Chief Warlock cannot be biased... - unbiased

Good golly, the nasty innuendos were flying high in this chapter. Kind of came out of left field. If this is the new Potter...not sure I like him.

I am actually sad that you didn't want Harry to be with Sirius and Remus. Plenty of explanations that could excuse his 'uncle's' attitudes. Having Harry snub them forever is harsh. Many, many people have been bamboozled by Dumbles.

This story had promise but you managed to turn Harry into a petulant, arrogant and annoying character - and as for Megan, a relationship happening that quickly is ridiculous and the amount of teenage whining and angst was frustrating to read. And then the story quickly descended into complete nonsense with the "Veil as a passage to another realm" - how convenient...and the last chapter was badly written snippets of random plots - I simply kept reading to the bitter end as I wanted to see if this "story" could find even deeper depths of clichéd banality than the previous 14 chapters and unfortunately I was right.

lets hope hestia doesn't say anything about harry

I love this story and your grammar is not horrible enough to stop reading. I love your story telling. Bad grammar/spelling can be ignored when the story is awesome.

... I have no idea when I wrote this! Maybe 2023?

absolutely loved this story. stayed up three extra hours because i couldnt put it down. Ron and Halermione are sone of my favorite characters and this story made me hate those two. I think it is great when an author can turn my feelings for a character that i actually like. great job

Wow he fell in love with Megan without you even introducing her. If we didn't have a way to check in the fic info we wouldn't even know her name. They didn't even exchange a few words.

You wrote: “Never doubt that I didn't love you.”
Further proofreading is required.

Ha! That peanut butter thing referred to "Triwizard Tales" by Clell65619. I did a cursory glance across the reviews and found only one review that mentioned it. I happened to read it just a couple days ago, but would've remembered it nevertheless.

This was one of the greatest HP fics I've ever read. Thank You

Glad to have found your story. Enjoyed reading it. Ending was kind of abrupt like it’s missing a few chapters wrapping it all up.

I enjoyed the story up until the "through the Veil" junk; quite literally a Deus Ex Machina move beyond even ridiculous Potterverse magic. Also, logically inconsistent, I quote, ""I will still be me but I have changed a lot. Harry died when he went through that Veil and when I step back through, I will be reborn as Harrison James with a different surname.
...
"Merlin Harry, I'm talking to you in a dream and you're pulling a Dumbledore and speaking in circles. How do I even know this is real?"
...
He grinned "I'm not dead. I'm just not completely alive right now. I'm sure I'll get better."

Is he dead, or not? Is he Harry, or is he not? Did Voldemort kill him, fulfilling the prophecy, or not? Does Dumbledore inherit all his property, as enforced by magic, or not?
WTF?!

GOOD! Minerva McGonagall has finally been put in her place! In my opinion, while she's a
fine Transfiguration teacher, she's been a lousy Head of House for Gryffindor.