|Reviews for Better Late|
| lalala chapter 2 . 17h ago
Is anyone else getting the innuendos? Or is it just me
| shikasgirl10 chapter 10 . 1/6
You should its a good story
| alayna.cassidy chapter 10 . 12/4/2013
re you going to update this its really good?
| Blitza chapter 10 . 11/4/2013
I think it was wonderful.
| the girl who envies books chapter 10 . 10/25/2013
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/24/2013
that's okay. I agree. it was lovely. please write more!
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/14/2013
Nah! You're a really awesome writer. I was just wondering if any other YJ members are gonna be added into the story.
| dlargecat chapter 10 . 10/2/2013
I enjoyed this fic am I'm glad you posted it. Thank you :)
BTW: My brain's gone and tacked on an epilogue where Nitewing, Megan, and Artemis (and maybe Barry?) manage to trace Wally's path through the dimensions and come to rescue him. They arrive in 2016. Touching "I love you guys but this is my home now" scene follows.
| runwithanime chapter 10 . 9/15/2013
This fic is awesome
And the batflash feels are epic
So need a sequel with bruce and wally hooking up
Pretty please with a sexy wally on top XD
| Mark in orlando chapter 10 . 8/27/2013
Hey I'm with you there , Wally West is my favorite character I never liked that they made him so slow on YJ . In the comics Wally was faster than Bart even if he couldn't vibrate without blowing up what vibrated thru . But DC Comics wrote Wally out of existence with their new 52 reboot which is why I am boycotting DC Comics and not buying anymore until they bring back Wally West . To tell you the truth though I never liked how they portrayed him on JLU either , they made him very two dimensional . He was just a goofball who most of the League didn't take seriously , and he never had a girlfriend at all on the whole series . The closest he came was with Fire . They made John Stewart and Shayara more like real people . I guess the comics was where Wally was portrayed best , but I Did like him with Artemis on Young Justice . I'm a big Spitfire fan . They should have made him fast like Barry so he could have become the Flash with Bart as his sidekick .
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 10 . 7/28/2013
I'm sorry to see this ended, this story has got some real potential...But I'm with you on the whole YJ situation, DC betrayed their fans, and worse, left a lot of questions unanswered...
But who knows, maybe this story will live again one day...Keep writing my friend!
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
This story is changing my perception of the Justice League series...And it's got me thinking, what if Earth-16 Wally was meant to be this dimension's Flash? Maybe this is how it happened...
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
Now I get it, Walter West a.k.a. the Dark Flash...interesting direction...
| Obsidian The Ghost Faced chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
This is sounding a bit like "Flashpoint" somwhat...But I like it...
| Deep.Dark.Yet.Dangerous chapter 10 . 7/18/2013
Hey, wasn't there another AU of Wally named Walter, in the comics?
Except, J think Walter was evil... O.o
IDK if I'm remembering this right or not, but I'm pretty sure...
It caused me to stop and think for a minute when I first saw Walter being metioned here. ;' )
And I find it funny how I (finally) just watched Crisis on Two Earths yesterday, and it was mentioned in your story! X' D
Keep writing please! Can't wait till he next chapter!