|Reviews for Tangled Up In The Mainline|
| LaPumuckl chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
I'm very glad to have you back:)
Sorry about the house, I'm sure that was stressful...
Edward started to open up to Bella, that's amazing! I'm not sure she really see's how much strength that took for him and I'm sure there's a reason why he didn't told her more yet...
Charlie was great! I tried to put myself in his shoes, and think it's very hard to get to know about your daughter kissing someone (more like mouth fucking) by some strangers and not her...
And with all his heartbreak over Renee, he didn't gave her a long lecture, but just the basics;)
Not to forget he understands she needs some time with Edward now...
The talk with Angela... I don't know, why Edward didn't told her the whole truth, but I KNOW there's a very good reason for it! I trust you, that it hasn't anything to do with another girl, but more with protecting - not sure if himself or her.
| littlelizruth chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Yay! Welcome back. I'm still in for this story. We all have RL to deal with, I'm just glad you came back.
| jansails chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
TUITM was one of my favs as it brought me into another lifestyle, that of commercial fishing & East Coast island life.
Not that I'm completely ignorant, having been born about 75 miles from Charleston SC, I was a frequent visitor to Edisto Beach & Isle of Palms.
But, the details of commercial fishing when it comes to native (born there) island or town-folk versus travelling fishing crews was new to me.
Combine that with Edward's secret identity to protect him from mobsters, the budding romance with Bella, & TUITM is part mystery we want to unravel & part love story between two people who, otherwise, would never have met were it not for the danger Edward is hiding from!
Fascinating reading, love it.
| prettymomma128 chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
I was so happy to see this chapter. I hope that the writer's block has lifted because I can't wait to read more. Great chapter!
| Scorpio11 chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Oh dear, and just when things were going so swimmingly for these two.
| deranged-dreamer chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Noooo. Why is he lying?
Sorry about the house
| blue022 chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Glad to see your update - enjoyed this chapter!
| mellocellogirl chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Hi lovely lady!
I'm so sorry to hear about your RL trials and tribulations. I hope you are okay.
I enjoyed this chapter very much, as I have enjoyed every other chapter. They are always worth waiting for!
Thanks for sharing your Duran Duran story, too. I am also a Duranie from way back!
Love you lots xxxx
| Jane3105 chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
This doesn't look good for Edward. Great story.
| hikingurl48 chapter 12 . 11/8/2013
I've had this story on my "to read list" for sometime now and have finally started it. Wow I am so glad I did. I'm truly impressed with your story telling skills. The descriptions are wonderful and make this do much more than your average fanfic lovestory. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks
| Pyejammies chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
What a lucky girl you are meeting Duran Duran. I bet you stiff have a goofy smile on your face. So Edward has slipped up a bit wiht his cover story. I wonder if he will come clean but that will put him and his father at risk. I presume his mother was killed by mistake; it was his father they were aiming for.
| redviolet chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Welcome back! Missed this fic.
| 2muchtrouble chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Of course I remember you. Will Bella confront Edward about the lie or will she just stew over it and try to figure it out on her own? At least she had a great week with him first.
| Kerry Hale chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
| debslmac chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
love this story. Thank you for updating