|Reviews for A Good Choice Is No Choice|
| hpjlover chapter 13 . 1/8/2014
This story is really really good I love the plot its really different that anything I've ever read before and I can't wait to see what will happen next. I feel really bad for sherlock and john I can't imagine what will happen after john 'wakes up' I really love this book its really well written and the characters are accurate and the plot is amazing and interesting keep up the great work PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2013
not sure but i really really think you are missing something inbetween chapter 2 and 3. it could have been a time leap, but the brief "in our previous episode" does not match. just an observation.
| destinationmirkwood chapter 13 . 8/7/2013
OH. MY. GAWD.
I'm actually using more of an effort to misspell the word than to spell it correctly. That's how amazed I am at this story and the previous. Sorry, I'm a little tired.
But seriously, words cannot describe my feelings towards these. The situations you put them in dont just walk the line between rape and consensual, they practically do a Russian ballet on it. I'm always hanging on to every word and having to stop myself from skipping lines to see what's going to happen.
So, just so I know for sure, you haven't posted the 3rd part if these stories, right? I noticed this was just uploaded in March so it's understandable. Oh I'm going to be awaiting the 3rd story on baited breath, especially with the state you left poor John & Sherlock in! Pobrecitos :( cant wait!
| Sendai chapter 13 . 5/21/2013
That's too sad for me because Sherlock blames himself when he shouldn't. John needs him, and if he pulls away because of guilt then it will hurt John.
I really wanted JOhn to be faking his flashback and tricking Mycroft/Lestrade.
I hope there is a sequel soon.
BTW LUV the guards disguised as brickwalls! LOL
| themuller chapter 13 . 5/19/2013
Oh no - this is so heart wrenching. 'Broken Goods' indeed. John gone into psychosis, and Sherlock broken as well. I really, really hope you'll have a happy ending in the third part. I'm afraid we still haven't hit rock bottom - with your imagination, I'm very nervous about what you can come up with in the last part. ... Still, I'm looking forward to it, hoping that it will be the happy ending these two deserve by now.
| Elfreida chapter 13 . 5/17/2013
The result, I think, was spot on. Wonderfully sharp and soft at turns keeping everything flowing whist coming to the gut wrenching conclusion (after a raw, horrifying climax). Brilliant - a morbid comment on my tendency to view extreme emotional distress like pornography, but I have to say this is brilliant. Without doubt.
Eagerly anticipating part three!
| AlessNox chapter 13 . 5/16/2013
It's about time they got rescued...unless this is a drug induced hallucination. Heaven Forfend.
Is Murray from Two Two One Bravo Baker? If so, I love that fic.
Anyway, I can't wait for the aftermath. It's sure to be Angsty beyond belief.
Looking forward to part 3.
| AlessNox chapter 12 . 5/15/2013
Dark, Dark, Dark
| saphie1990 chapter 12 . 5/13/2013
Oh my god! You need to update asap!
| Sendai chapter 12 . 5/11/2013
OMG this is just aweful (I hope you know what I mean. Aweful for SH and JW). It is heartbreaking, and I just know that I won't like the end of part II, because it is going to make me sad, isn't it.
John is just too brave for his own good.
I hope you update soon, and I really, really hope that part III ends up a little more positive? You said in one of the A/N's that you don't do fluff and stuff, but they deserve a sorta happy ending after all their suffering.
Also, extremely well written. Your descriptions and narrative flow so well.
| hjohn302 chapter 11 . 5/8/2013
Oh, I do hope you are able to add to this sometime soon... I am so totally hooked. Of course the Lunatic would change the rules and drug poor Sherlock. Ugh.
I look forward to more!
| Shapeshifting Tango chapter 11 . 5/6/2013
Ahhh...your chapter is suspensefully cockblocking my angst train. Why did you have to stop? I would have been perfectly happy with an oh-so-friggin-long chapter, but no. You wanted my soul to ache. I've got some sort of weird blue balls of feelings, now. Thanks.
| StArBarD chapter 9 . 5/3/2013
Oh god, the Lunatic is a fanboy.
| Sendai chapter 9 . 4/30/2013
OMG. I lost track of this fic and it didn't come up on my favorites (I'll have to check that box again). Anyway, I finally remembered that I wanted to find it and got to read 6 whole chapters at once.
But they weren't very nice chapters some of them. Very, very wrenching and sad. I must question why JOhn is being tortured if you are mad at Mycroft and Sherlock. Shouldn't you just chain them up in a room where they have to watch Anderson eating chocolate cake while telling SHerlock how to examine a crime scene. Surely they would break rather quickly...
Oh right, the review. The writing is powerful and the descriptions really bring it all to life. The last two chapters were aptly named. They were anice break and Sherlock was wonderful to John, both in breaking the flashback and tending to him.
This fic is gripping, and I am anxious to find out what happens next. I hope that John will be OK. It might be nice for him and Sherlock to develop a relationship because honestly,after all this suffering, I think they deserve it. (But Mycroft can be chained up just out of reach of his chocolate cake for sending them into this hell.)
| Motaku1235 chapter 9 . 4/29/2013
Oh no...he's joined the Johnlockians!