|Reviews for Anonymous|
| booksnob chapter 1 . 3/9
I love it. Definitely a new take. I kind of want a sequel or at least a second chapter of Pollo finding out the truth and maybe deciding which path to follow
| GeekyGenius chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Exciting! I am sad that this is only a one shot, I think it could be a great story!
| Lovely Story Writer chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Please, write next chapter! I really want to know what happens next!
| Little Town chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Oh, this is such a good story! The grammar and content is flawless, and I think a second chapter is necessary... I bet most of us would like an explanation on what happened to Apollo and Pearl after Phoenix sees them. PLEASE MAKE A SECOND CHAPTER OR SOMETHING!
| sonicboy678 chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Imagine if you actually don't end up too far off the mark.
Nice description of post-AJ Pearl, by the way.
| Shenron I wish for a cabbage chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
This story... I'm in awe! It's great! Why is it just a one-shot, though? I can easily imagine an amazing story out of this! Since GS5 isn't even in Japan yet, you still have plenty of time to finish it without the game coming out to completely ruin the plot :P
| MildeAmasoj chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
A review it's probably useless, but, hey, reviews certainly make you feel better.
THIS WAS THE MOST AMAZING SPOILER-BASED-FIC I'VE EVER READ IN MY WHOLE LIFE!
And, trust me, I've read a lot of them.
You're great, you're great, you're great.
Ok, you got the idea.
Kisses from Italy!
| twilighteve-writes chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
oh, come on... what's with the cliffhanger? please continue it, i LOVE it. it makes the apollo-becomes-prosecutor theory plausible. i'd love to see what happens next, really.
| AdventureWriter28 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
A cliffhanger! I'm surprised this is just a one-shot! This should be continued!