|Reviews for My unmasked gentleman|
| Stelle Lucentene chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
That was just AMAZING!
My only problem may be that I'm more used to call Descole "Desmond Sycamore" (or Des) whenever he's not in his Descole persona, since Sycamore wasn't a disguise but his true face and he even had a reputation, so I call him "Des" since that's actually himself. I didn't find his nervousness OOC at all and it was so cute!
I normally read fast, but I wanted to enjoy every single word and sentence of this fanfic! This is my favourite PL pairing (at least in the non- canon) and it definitely needs more love! The story has got a sad beginning, but the ending was just so perfect, like a true fairy tale!(Honestly)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
AWE-SOME story! I looooove it! Thank you so much for uploading :)
| ThePixelAngel chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Oh my God. A fanfic about one of my favorite pairings. FINALLY! I've been looking for one for such a long time! The characters are, well, in character, and everything flows very nicely. Thank you sooo much for writing this lovely story!
| Sailor Scout Cookies chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
I love this story! Emmy/Descole is my favorite shipping, and I love how you write them! This has earned a favorite!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
So... Much... Feels... that was an amazing story, I think you may be the reason I am now hooked on this pairing... I never thought of how much the two shared in common. Anyways, I really loved the detail and all! Thank you for creating such a wonderful story!
| The Fez Freako 1999 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
From reading the first few paragraphs I am already realy getting into this book. It is brilll
| ScaredOfTheBlueBadger chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Wow! Great job Abbie!
| Emerald Enchantress chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Abbie... this is the best bit of Demmy fluff I have ever read! I absolutely love it! It was perfect... perfect fluff... They're so perfect! And he was being such a gentleman, too! I like how she got a little mask and cape too... Well done, brilliantly written!
| NeverOnEarth chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Honestly, that was very very cute, and very very sad, and very very... Good.
I loved it! Pretty much sums up all my praise. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.
Peace is a blessing, so treasure it always!
| The Mocking J chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
This is an incredible oneshot. I'm sure Thea , Em and all those other Demmy/Dessy fans out there will love it too. I've got a feeling it will be the first of many fics with this pairing.
The cover picture is so badass! Kind of reminds me of Dessy being Batman and Emmy being Batgirl XD
The backstory you gave Emmy about Reinel rescuing her from the orphanage is great. (And it suggests that Demmy/Lemmy pairings can still work.) It kind of shows why she did what she did in Azran Legacies.
I know this is a Demmy fic... but you threw in a teeny-weeny bit of Layton/Emmy hints, didn't you? Well, you at least showed that they (once) cared for each other. When Emmy was feeling guilty in front of the professor, I almost felt guilty. Whoa. I can understand why she was so mad at Layton... but I don't know if she would've been that mean to Luke. Ah, well. LOL at Grosky " trying to stop his chest hair from being affected" when he was coughing. XD
Other people might write Demmy moments and leave it at that, but you went that extra bit further, giving some interesting info about the jewel Emmy was stealing, and describing Descole's elaborate home in full detail. Anyway, the romantic moments were so full of passion and FANTASTIC! (It reminded me of Beauty and the Beast for some reason...) I think Dessy crying tears of joy was a little OOC... but it was so cute and... romantic and... lovely and- and- DJNSDMSMCD!
This looked like it took a long time to write but pleeeease do another chapter or a SEQUEL in future :D I want to see what Emmy and Dessy get up on on their adventures!
-Amazing job, MJ.
| North Star Puppet chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
OH ABBIE, THIS WAS THE BEST GIFT EVER!
I loved it I loved it I loved it I loved it! In truth, it made me rather sad that Emmy ruined her relationship with Layton and Luke... I'll admit I shed a few tears at that... But I'm certain something like this would happen:
Emmy is feeling a bit down one day, so Raymond asks what's wrong, because she doesn't want to worry Dessy... Then she tells him about Luke and Layton, and then they talk, and then she goes to them in secret, and ey talk, and talk, and then poof their relation ship is happy again! :D
Otherwise that, it made me fly on clouds- this was so adorable, and cute, and adorable, and lovey dovey, and SO ADORABLE! I LOVED IT SO SO MUCHHH! THANK YOOOU! *glomps Abbie*
Pieces to Peace!