|Reviews for Omegas VS Cahills|
| Anniejackson1 chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
please keep posting! this is really good
| Baka-Hentai-Nina chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
WRITE MORE NOW XD
| THGFAN101 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Nice beginning. :)
A few things though:
I pretty sure that the beginning should be called the Prologue. The ending is called the Epilogue. You might want to change that,
Also, it would be best to make it longer. The actual story is about 200 words.
You need to double space in between each paragraph.
I wish you best of luck,