|Reviews for The Narrow Path|
| AlexLunaaah chapter 28 . 6/2/2013
The ending was perfect.
It really was, then again so was your story.
I loved all of it, I really did.
You're just so good at adding in other factors like emotion & your planning definitely payed off.
Definitely one of the best fan fiction stories I've ever read, probably top 3.
What will you be working on next?
| raissa20 chapter 28 . 6/2/2013
Nice. I loved it. What are you planning on doing next? I would love to see you writing Hunger Games in Haymitch's POV.
| ForFutureReference chapter 28 . 6/2/2013
He's right, the idea that he became a father and planned for it is in the realm of the surreal. But after some level, it works.
"Peeta still tends to spin elaborate lies for the fun of it." At least it is not for survival.
In general, you definitely kept a good pace leading up to this.
All-in-all. good job.
| Clover80 chapter 28 . 6/2/2013
Perfect! Or as close to perfect as anything is in reality!
| gabz1197 chapter 28 . 6/2/2013
That was a really sweet ending :)
| Chasing Silmarils chapter 28 . 6/2/2013
What a sweet ending! I really liked this story, and this epilogue is written beautifully, This probably ranks among the top five fanfics that I have ever read. Seriously. :)
| Norbert's Mom chapter 28 . 6/2/2013
Wonderful ending to a great story. Thank you so much for sharing it.
| Laurelyn chapter 27 . 6/1/2013
The number of reviews simply does not do your story justice. It deserves much more recognition for such a beautifully written piece that depicts the characters wonderfully.
| Chasing Silmarils chapter 27 . 5/31/2013
This is a really good interpretation of destroying the arenas and the characters' recoveries. Not many fanfics are about Mockingjay, or centered around Haymitch, so I really think that this one is unique. I love how you can see the characters healing and all that. Keep writing! :)
| ForFutureReference chapter 27 . 5/31/2013
The death toll from the war does seem reasonable, and with no Hunger Games looming over their heads, it makes sense that people would be more enthusiastic about reproducing like rabbits.
I like that you mention how the prior harvest festivals weren't actually during harvest time.
Gale and Johanna's not-relationship is quite amusing.
| Gdreams chapter 27 . 5/30/2013
That was an amazing chapter. The destroying of the arenas was just awesome. And katniss and peetas wedding. And the Hayffie. Gaaaahhh
| AmetrineAngel chapter 27 . 5/30/2013
I'm going to be so sad when this is absolutely over. I think Haymitch gets a bad rap and I love reading stories like this, where his struggles are more human and easier to understand and feel. I hate it when he's just painted as a dumb drunk. Thank you for this story.
| raissa20 chapter 26 . 5/29/2013
Great. I loved it. You're writing more than I expected you to. I'm glad.
| Norbert's Mom chapter 26 . 5/29/2013
Very nice. I like the explanation for how Buttercup showed up the same day as Peeta.
| Clover80 chapter 26 . 5/29/2013
I love your stories. They are perfect narrative for the things we never saw in the books. I am always excited when I get an email saying there is a new chapter!