Reviews for The Heart of Darkness
sullysnonna chapter 32 . 2/8
I really enjoyed this story! Looking forward to futures stories from you. The best to you always!
Guest chapter 30 . 12/22/2024
She felt self-conscious, not subconscious.
Guest chapter 27 . 12/22/2024
The plane shudders, not shutters.
Guest chapter 25 . 12/22/2024
Blowtorches cut through steel, not steal.
Guest chapter 24 . 12/22/2024
"for me to peak out" It's "peek," which means a quick, sometimes secretive, glance. A "peak" is the topmost part of something that usually comes to a point, like a mountaintop.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/21/2024
It's "blind sided," not "blind sighted."
Guest chapter 11 . 12/20/2024
It's "gamut," not "gamete."
grapesiii chapter 18 . 9/28/2024
This is so cute
CrustyVamp chapter 21 . 6/2/2024
o que eu ainda nao entendi, é o que os tios do seth acham q ele tá fazendo? o enino foi pra montana por varios dias e ninguém sentiu falta?
bearygirl chapter 32 . 1/29/2024
Loved this story so much. Thanks so much for sharing.
Guest chapter 22 . 4/17/2023
Your writing is superb. Don’t often find this caliber of writing on ff.
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 32 . 4/24/2022
Life is good indeed...especially with those four looking out for you!
Thank you!
That was a brilliant outtake and just hit the spot!
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 31 . 4/24/2022
This was truly a phenomenal journey and I thank you for sharing it. You have a gift and I hope you are inspired to use it more often. ;)
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 30 . 4/24/2022
Edward really does consider Bella's needs before his own. Such a wonderful dynamic.
I'm so thrilled Jenks is staying and employing the rest of the gang!
Now if only Jenks and Bella would partner up and kick ass at Pictionary...
Starting the foundation in Renee's name was a very thoughtful idea. I adore Seth.
I think this is the only story where I've really disliked Jasper!
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 29 . 4/24/2022
I'm so sad about Jake! :(
But thank you for not killing off Jenks! ;)
It's too bad Bella didn't get to end James.
Now Seth and Jake...were they related somehow? Was Jake Seth's uncle or something?
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