Reviews for The Heart of Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! Looking forward to futures stories from you. The best to you always! |
![]() ![]() She felt self-conscious, not subconscious. |
![]() ![]() The plane shudders, not shutters. |
![]() ![]() Blowtorches cut through steel, not steal. |
![]() ![]() "for me to peak out" It's "peek," which means a quick, sometimes secretive, glance. A "peak" is the topmost part of something that usually comes to a point, like a mountaintop. |
![]() ![]() It's "blind sided," not "blind sighted." |
![]() ![]() It's "gamut," not "gamete." |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() o que eu ainda nao entendi, é o que os tios do seth acham q ele tá fazendo? o enino foi pra montana por varios dias e ninguém sentiu falta? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story so much. Thanks so much for sharing. |
![]() ![]() Your writing is superb. Don’t often find this caliber of writing on ff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Life is good indeed...especially with those four looking out for you! Thank you! That was a brilliant outtake and just hit the spot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was truly a phenomenal journey and I thank you for sharing it. You have a gift and I hope you are inspired to use it more often. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward really does consider Bella's needs before his own. Such a wonderful dynamic. I'm so thrilled Jenks is staying and employing the rest of the gang! Now if only Jenks and Bella would partner up and kick ass at Pictionary... Starting the foundation in Renee's name was a very thoughtful idea. I adore Seth. I think this is the only story where I've really disliked Jasper! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sad about Jake! :( But thank you for not killing off Jenks! ;) It's too bad Bella didn't get to end James. Now Seth and Jake...were they related somehow? Was Jake Seth's uncle or something? |