|Reviews for The Heart of Darkness|
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/17
Your writing is superb. Don’t often find this caliber of writing on ff.
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 32 . 4/24/2022
Life is good indeed...especially with those four looking out for you!
That was a brilliant outtake and just hit the spot!
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 31 . 4/24/2022
This was truly a phenomenal journey and I thank you for sharing it. You have a gift and I hope you are inspired to use it more often. ;)
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 30 . 4/24/2022
Edward really does consider Bella's needs before his own. Such a wonderful dynamic.
I'm so thrilled Jenks is staying and employing the rest of the gang!
Now if only Jenks and Bella would partner up and kick ass at Pictionary...
Starting the foundation in Renee's name was a very thoughtful idea. I adore Seth.
I think this is the only story where I've really disliked Jasper!
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 29 . 4/24/2022
I'm so sad about Jake! :(
But thank you for not killing off Jenks! ;)
It's too bad Bella didn't get to end James.
Now Seth and Jake...were they related somehow? Was Jake Seth's uncle or something?
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 28 . 4/24/2022
Once it was revealed that Jake was alive, I kind of suspected he was undercover. And I do believe he loved/loves Bella.
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 25 . 4/24/2022
'How can this be? I think as the colors finally blur to black.'
Hhhhmmmm... Is that a clue?
Is it Jacob Black standing there?
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 24 . 4/24/2022
Aaaaawww... So glad they were able to truly celebrate the holidays and their love.
Having been going through the pandemic, I think anyone reading your story now would truly be able to understand cabin fever! Yuck!
And what is Jasper's deal?
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 22 . 4/23/2022
I'm already tearing up!
I just know something is going to go wrong before they have their happily ever after...AND JENKS BETTER SURVIVE THIS!
I like him. Just sayin'. ;)
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 18 . 4/23/2022
Damn! It's like 3 AM; don't any of them ever sleep?
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 15 . 4/22/2022
Jenks is a great addition to the team and I'm ecstatic that Seth is with Bella.
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 14 . 4/22/2022
I always love Emmet's commentary!
Leave it to him to always lighten the mood!
Let's hope no harm comes to Seth. That would be tragic!
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 12 . 4/22/2022
You put a lot of thought and knowledge into Bella's story; it is very much appreciated. That's what differentiates a good writer from a brilliant one. ;)
So sad that Caius didn't live long after her escape, but I'm sure he thought the price of her freedom was worth it.
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 10 . 4/22/2022
Other than that Mrs. Lincoln, how did you enjoy the play?
| EdwardsVampTramp chapter 5 . 4/21/2022
So Swan was a name given to her to hide her true identity?
And who is HE? Aro?
Damn...I'm so confused.
But thank God for Emmett and his comedic relief!