Reviews for Sex Changes Everything
Kisaki Sakura chapter 3 . 4/8
Before reading on, I have to drop a comment right here. Beside the point of consent (as it is Harry/Tom it can be rightfully ignored), there are a few points that have me havily disappointend.
First and foremost the fact that you ignored the basic anatomy. No man can go on fucking like that without a pause, as the tip of the penis is to sensible and would without a doubt cause severe pain. And well... Harry isn't quite in charactere. But maybe this is something that will be explained later on.
(Honestly! His behaviour is absurd. Even on drugs no Harry Potter would behave like that)
kirsty21 chapter 40 . 2/5
Tiriltoget chapter 1 . 2/1
Just a tip: it's less confusing and far better to read if you stay to one point of view at least through a Whole Chapter. Switching between Third person and first person point of view is as I see it a no-go in writing.
Okkiii chapter 1 . 1/22
This Odd? I dunno...but it was good..but odd...and too fast
shaniquawilliams707 chapter 7 . 9/13/2015
Your very ...sadistic I see
Rose Hathaway Potter chapter 40 . 6/5/2015
I love it!
Lavonya chapter 27 . 5/15/2015
So sexy!
Lavonya chapter 24 . 5/15/2015
Scary Father!
Lavonya chapter 23 . 5/15/2015
Lavonya chapter 22 . 5/15/2015
Did she die?
Lavonya chapter 21 . 5/15/2015
Lavonya chapter 20 . 5/15/2015
Scary... poor creatures...
Lavonya chapter 18 . 5/15/2015
Oh... what a mean trick...
Lavonya chapter 17 . 5/15/2015
Awesome... sex equals inheritance!
Lavonya chapter 16 . 5/15/2015
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