Reviews for Crimson Bonds
Jesseburnett chapter 39 . 9/18/2017
damn, are you ever going to lay off poor Alice? XD lmao it's not her fault your version of her is so stupid XD Bella kicking paul's add was just great, nice job with that, as usual
Jesseburnett chapter 37 . 9/18/2017
sheesh, EVERY SINGLE character in this story not part of the denali coven is an enemy. either pathetic or an asshole or something. its getting way past old. this may sound cheesy, but you've got a lot of hate in your heart girl lol. and judging by your writing you are most definetly a girl, not a woman. certainly intellegent, but immature none the less. not that there is anything wrong with that, of course. its a good thing storm is a girl and not a boy, otherwise im sure you would have had Bella kick him and say "scram, you filthy male mutt!" XP
Jesseburnett chapter 31 . 9/18/2017
why are the denali belittling jasper? insinuating he is downright moronic and totally losing patience with him for not inventing extremely complex technology? he has never done anything to them. and calling him boy, really? Jasper is centuries old and has lived a life FAR more maturing than any of the denali. just didnt really sit right with me. anyways wow bella and rose's first intimate interaction was friggin amazing! you are so damn good at writing smut lmao! good at writing period. bravo
Jesseburnett chapter 29 . 9/18/2017
just to be clear, i actually love a good edward bashing XD but to bash his character you actually have to write him at least somewhat correctly. as it stands you just wrote this entirely different character. if you dont like him so much you should at least write his actual character and bash him! there wasnt even one single thing about him in this story that was anything close to his actual character at all, so it feels like you just wrote some OC for us to hate. Makes it seem like you just hate him bc he is a guy, not bc of his character. you actually dont know anything about him at all, but hate him anyway. hence why it comes off as immature and man-hating. at this point it prolly seems like im defending dickward, so ima stop now XD hope you dont hate me now XD if you even still read these reviews anyway. still one of my absolute favorite fanfics!
Jesseburnett chapter 29 . 9/17/2017
I hate to complain at all bc I love this story so much, but I can't help but be dissapointed in how you wrote edward. not that I like him, I indeed strongly dislike him. But the way you wrote him is just like all the other teenage lesbians write him bc they hate the fact that he gets the main character so they blow his flaws completely out of proportion and totally turn him into the most unlikable character imaginable XD to put it bluntly, I just feel like this story is above all that. its so good i feel that it should have made him like he is in the source material. he was a bit controlling and so broody that it was annoying, yes. but he was a complete gentlemen, he wouldnt act anything close to how you portrayed him. I just feel like you making him so out of character like that makes you seem like all the other teenage feminazis out there turning him in to some despicable character, attacking his flaws and blowing them entirely out of proportion just bc hes a guy. i just feel like you and your story would come off much more mature if you simply made him how stephanie meyer did. his character how it is, is plenty enough to not like him lol, you didnt have to turn him in to that little weasel lmao. oh well, doesnt really matter i just had to point out that your story is really intelligently done so im a bit surprised you did something as immature as that. doesnt really make this story any less awesome at all.
Jesseburnett chapter 28 . 9/17/2017
I'm slightly worried that because there is so much sex in the story, literally everyone has fucked everyone and their mother lol, that when the main pairing finally get around to actually doing it with each other it will have completely lost its "magic" so to speak. Though everytime someone has sex there is always some theme with it to keep it entertaining, whether its animalistic passion like with alice and bella, the dominating sex with rose and kate, the loving sex with tanya and kate, the human/vampire dynamic in Irena's story of her past, or bella downright raping Irena. So im sure you'll come up with something to make there first time entertaining. Maybe you'll even wait for Victoria I wonder?
Jesseburnett chapter 28 . 9/17/2017
Your fic just keeps getting more and more awesome as it goes, this is easily one of the best twilight fics. Its probably tied with Princess Alexandria's "lone Wolf" as my favorite. I gotta say the entire Cullen family is extremely out of character, especially Carlisle and Edward, hell honestly everyone is, but you completely warned that you had never read the books and are going to simply make it your own so obviously that is totally fine. Hell its refreshing to read something different. love it love it love it, thx again for writing this! its so ridiculously entertaining!
Jesseburnett chapter 25 . 9/17/2017
its weird, at first bella and rose felt as if there was 'something missing' with there bond. I assumed it was victoria. but they obviously dont feel that anymore. oh well i spose ill find out soon
Jesseburnett chapter 25 . 9/17/2017
all the jealousy in this story is so entertaining XD I mean, it totally makes sense, a bunch of sex crazed lesbians that are half controlled by their baser instincts living under the same roof, of course there would be a bunch of jealousy. But it is very entertaining none the less XD quite hilarious
Jesseburnett chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
wow Irena's backstory is so entertaining! I absolutely love it
Jesseburnett chapter 11 . 9/15/2017
I completely agree in every way, Rose needed to do that with Kate. She isn't even in that kind of relationship with Bella yet. I won't even try and explain why she needed to do it, It's all said perfectly by the author why she needed to do it. The people that are freakin out about it are just unreasonable. They've read too many fanfics where everything just works out perfectly between two people that are completely without any real life issues. Put simply people are used to fairy tales. I think it was done perfectly, and not to mention that scene was friggin HOT. My god was it hot lmao. This fic is amazing, tysssssm for writing it!
Jesseburnett chapter 3 . 9/14/2017
You know, Trinity Wilson's comment got me thinking, you claimed you do not need to know anything about the source material to read your story, but you didn't bother mentioning that none of them are actually related XD Everyone is in a relationship while Esme is calling them all daughter and son XD
Jesseburnett chapter 2 . 9/14/2017
I love how this is basically an Anne Rice story with twilight characters. The writing is also well done.
vegetals chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
seems kinda incestuous but...
vegetals chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
seems kinda incestuous but...
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