Reviews for JLU Spiderverse
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 1h
If you're going to have the Suicide Squad in this story then you could have Shocker become a part of it. The members of that group will probably include; Deadshot(since he's the leader), Plastique, King Shark, Red Hulk(because he was also a member of the Thunderbolts), Captain Boomerang, Shocker, Katana, Metallo, Electro, Rhino(only a clone of him ), Killer Croc, and Chameleon. The League could assemble their own stealth team to battle Cadmus and then the Spider Friends will probably include; Spider-Man (since he's got the most experience), Supergirl, Mainframe, the A-Bomb, Miss Martian, Superboy(he's a clone of Superman), Nightwing, Batgirl, Firestorm, Artemis, Wonder Girl, and Green Lantern(Kyle Rainer). Forget about including the return of the Secret Society, besides after dealing with Cadmus, some of Spider-Man's villains might join forces with a few of the Justice League's villains in the future.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 15h
The Sinister Twelve could probably include Green Goblin, Dr. Octopus, Juggernaut, Volcana, Copperhead, Wendigo, Metallo, Electro, Livewire, Clayface, Mysterio, and Paper doll. Just for the purpose of eliminating Spider-Man and all the Justice League, of course the Spider Friends will be brought together first. The team will probably have a similarity to the Teen Titans, only different from that team and then the team will probably include; Spider-Man, Supergirl, Nightwing, Batgirl, Mainframe, the A-Bomb, Miss Martian, Beast Boy, Wonder Girl, Green Lantern(Kyle Rayner), and Artemis.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 16h
I also have an idea that if you have Black Canary appear in this story some more, she could be very useful in battles against a few of Spider-Man's villains such as Venom (since his weakness is loud noises) Sandman, Chameleon, Mysterio, Hydroman, and Spider-Carnage. I'm sure that Supergirl, Green Arrow, Miss Martian and the A-Bomb will probably fight against the other villains like Molten Man, Wendigo, Scorpion, the Vulture, Hobgoblin, and Juggernaut.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 17h
Spider-Man and Green Arrow are probably going to be working together in the future, as will Supergirl and Black Canary. Shocker's introduction in this story will probably include the last time he fought Spider-Man and then he wound up getting electrocuted with his own suit and gaining vibration shockwaves that he could manipulate to blast through walls and cause the ground to shake up with tremors and an earthquake(same thing happened with Grodd, only he got telepathy). The Spider Friends will probably include Spider-Man, Supergirl, Green Arrow, Black Canary, Mainframe, the A-Bomb, Miss Martian, Steel, the Atom, Firestorm, Nightwing, and Batgirl. If Flash accompanies Barda and Mr. Miracle to Apocalips, Spider-Man, Mainframe, and the A-Bomb could join them and might find that the Hulk wounded up there and was brainwashed into a warrior, Peter and Rick could be the only ones to save him.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/26
Do you think that you could include the Secret Society in this story? I think it's time for one or two of Spider-Man's villains to join that team, and it would probably be Molten Man and the Shocker. Having Molten Man team up with Giganta and Bizarro just to break Grodd out of prison, only to be apprehended by Spider-Man, Wonder Woman and Long Shadow. Shade could be trying to pull off a heist as usual and the Shocker could team up with Killer Frost to rob a bank or a jewelry store, only to wind up getting caught by Spider-Man and the Flash. Then Grodd will probably have a plan to destroy the League again, only trying to kill three or four at a time, and he will probably recruit Giganta, Molten Man, Shade, Shocker and Killer Frost in order to do so starting with Spider-Man. I'm sure that if the Society attempts to kill Spider-Man first, some of the other members of the League will have to help him; Wonder Woman, Long Shadow, the Flash, Supergirl, Cyborg and the Atom.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/26
I'm pretty sure that if you're going to have the Cadmus Clone Saga in this story and you could include the Jackel, since he is responsible for making several clones of Spider-Man, a clone of Gwen Stacy, and a clone of Peter's father. I'm sure if he could be included then he would probably not only make a clone of Peter called Spider-Carnage, but also makes a clone of Rhino with all of Rhino's memories installed. Well after Waller sends the Suicide Squad to infiltrate the Watchtower and then they not only steal from the League, but also liberate Metallo, Electro, and what's left of Rhino. Electro and Metallo could get a few physical improvements and upgrades, Electro could undergo a procedure that enhances his powers allowing him to fly, phase through electrical outlets, and electrically control robots, while Metallo could have a new upgrade to make him more deadly to both Martians and Kryptonians. As much as he's gotten the upgrade to turn his head all the way around, and fire lasers out of his eyes, Cadmus could give him an upgrade that allows him to change his arms into flame throwers and electrical circuits that would electricute Martians that try to phase through him.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/24
If you do include Clayface in this story, then he could probably be brought back to life because the last time the League saw him, he was blown up with fireworks. I'm sure if Mysterio hears about what happened to him, then he's going to need some assistance for finding out how Clayface was revived before he was recruited into the Secret Society. The next few chapters could very much include Venom, Sandman, Man-Bat, Bane, Killer Croc, Hobgoblin, Juggernaut, Morlun, Pyro, Hydroman, Shriek, Galatea, Red Hulk, Spider-Carnage, Volcana, Cheetah, Shocker, Vulture, Star Sapphire, and Beetle.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/23
I think it would be nice if you could include the part where Spider-Man gets his silver and black suit that's made out of Vibranium. The next villain will probably be Mysterio and then he could team up with Clayface because they've both worked in the movies before they became villains, just like Electro and Metallo working together. Doc Ock will probably assemble the Sinister Seven which might include; Electro, Metallo, Paper doll, Clayface, Mysterio, and Deadshot. You could have Rick Jones stay with Doctor Fate for a while until he's ready to join the League, Groot and Rocket could not only turn up in the DCverse, but also join the Green Lantern Corps, giving Kyle Rayner the opportunity to return home to Earth. After Kara graduates from high school and moves to New York, and then enrolls into NYU, she and Peter will probably realize that they are in love and start going out.
7-Eleven chapter 3 . 2/20
It's probably obvious that the whole story is a mystery about what plans the Green Goblin has for the new Earth to settle down into. I'm so sure that if he does appear in this story again, he could be the one to assemble the Sinister Twelve and then set his plans into motion. The Spider Friends will be the only ones to stop him and his accomplices from achieving their goals. The Sinister Twelve will probably include; Doc Ock, Sportsmaster, Cheshire, Mammoth, Juggernaut, Metallo, Electro, Livewire, the Weather Wizard, Paper doll, and Deadpool. This team of villains will also be put together in an attempt to destroy Spider-Man and his friends.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/18
I think it would probably be better to have Spider-Man, Nightwing, Firestorm and Rick Jones infiltrate Cadmus just to see what Cadmus is planning. I'm sure that in the process of their mission, they will probably discover Super boy and then rescue him, and they could also discover that whoever or whatever else was on board the Helicarrier would have been discovered by Cadmus. Whether it's Deadpool, Venom, Chameleon, Hydroman, or Shriek, followed by Lizard serum which could be tested on Killer Croc, the Carnage symbiote which could be used as part of cloning Peter, and then several dozen pieces of Vibranium and Adamantium.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/17
I think it would be something to have the Cadmus storyline include not only Task Force X infiltrating the Watchtower as coworkers, but also have a few League members infiltrate Cadmus. I know that I said just Peter, Rick, Ronnie, and Professor Stein could infiltrate spy on Cadmus by pretending to be employees, but M'gann, Mainframe and Nightwing could also go undercover with them. I'm so sure that if you're going to have Cadmus in this story then you could give Mainframe a body for going undercover and he could also put Adamantium and Vibranium into the Iron suits, so they could be indestructible and shock absorbent.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/15
The only reason I would like to have Firestorm in this story is because he could remind Spider-Man of his best friend Johnny Storm the Human Torch and of course Ronnie Raymond could hangout with Peter, Kara and M'gann. Then Professor Stein will probably share his scientific opinions with Peter and Dr Ray Palmer, and then you could also include the part where Spider-Man, Nightwing, and Firestorm will rescue Superboy from Cadmus. Then M'gann could use her telepathy to call the other members to help; (Supergirl, Mainframe, the A-Bomb, Wonder Girl, the Green Lantern Kyle Rayner, Batgirl, and Artemis). Thus forming the Spider Friends, and then having to face the Sinister Twelve and Cadmus.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/15
If Deadpool is in this story, then they will have to do something about it. Because he's a menace and he will probably be working with the Sinister Twelve and CADMUS, that would be something to think about. I'm sure if you could include Dr Doom in this story, he would probably have a similar role as Darkseid, and he could show up on the Watchtower and then try to get the Spider Friends to help him destroy Ultron. Loki will probably have a role to play as well, and then the Secret Society could come back as well. Spider-Man and Mainframe will have to join forces with the Atom, Rick Jones, Ronnie and Professor Stein to infiltrate Cadmus as employees in order to find out what Cadmus is planning.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/15
If you're going to start the CADMUS storyline, and include the pairings of SpideyXSupergirl and A-BombXM'gann, then sometime next week or next month try to continue the story. The next chapter will probably include Peter meeting the Kents, Kara graduates from high school and moves to New York City, the introduction of Galatea and Spider-Carnage, the Red Hulk goes on a rampage and A-Bomb stops him.
7-Eleven chapter 14 . 2/13
I think you better hurry-scurry, because everyone else who has been reading this story will appreciate it if you could think of how to continue the story and what characters to introduce next. The next chapter will probably pick up where the other left off, and my suggestion is either Spider-Man talks to the League about A-Bomb and the results of his mission or it's two months later on and Kara has graduated from high school and goes to ESU with Peter. I think it would be cool to have Ronnie Raymond and Professor Martin Stein in this story and then the CADMUS storyline begins.
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