Reviews for Assistant
Shadowheart51 chapter 10 . 8/5/2014
Can't wait for more
Blueeyes37 chapter 10 . 7/12/2014
I love this story! I hope you continue to write more for it!
Angelpenguin chapter 10 . 6/8/2014
I really hope that you continue this story or if you don't like how it is going revamp it. I like how it is going. Thanks for taking the time and effort!
yukio87 chapter 10 . 4/30/2014
Please update soon. I wanna know how the relationship between Sephiroth and Cloud go and if Sephiroth starts seeing Cloud more than an assistant. Please...update soon. I'll be waiting for the next chapters
NobleWarren chapter 10 . 4/14/2014
The routine monatony of this story is so strangely appealing...? The small nuances of fighting a silent battle daily are beyond riveting. It just isn't a common setting for Seph or Cloud and seeing them struggle internally with such identifiable problems makes them all the more human to me. I really love this fiction. I honestly have no clue where its going and it's the mundane nature of it that makes it so unpredictable. I don't think anyone else could make this so great so I'm glad you've stuck with this story for so long. Please don't let this marvel die of update starvation.
shaz chapter 10 . 3/27/2014
This peice is good. I realy don't know why you dont like it. then again leave it for 7 years then come back to it and look at what you have wrote. It makes you question your sanity and what you had been taking at the time. Beleive me i know.

I like these little chapters i can clearly understand what is going on and it is amusing is places. I tend to find with fics there is a lot of going off on tangents and pointless explanations that have no relevance to the stories but yours is clear and keeps the readers attention. You have good attention to detail and a well thought out plot in my opinion.

I would love to read this story to the end. And maybe if you feel like you still don't like it, go over a few things revamp it if necessary but i think you have a good knack to short stories or one-shots.

please continue!
JollyBigSis chapter 10 . 3/23/2014
Poor Cloudy, there's no progress between Seph and him work-wise. Seph is still hellbent on giving his assistant a hard time and Cloud's silently suffering through it. I am glad to see the wages he gets makes the job tolerable if not acceptable and that he won't have to move to a cruddier area because he can no longer afford it. Things are looking up for Cloud slightly… If only his boss wasn't being an ass…

The dinner was amusing. The awkwardness of Zack trying (and failing) to maintain conversation with Cloud, who was too distracted over the prices, was funny. But nothing came close to the awkwardness of Cloud trying (and failing) to maintain conversation with Sephiroth. It was like watching one of those comedy sketches, the tension made me sweat-drop and think, "Poor Cloud" all over again! Gawd, Sephiroth is so socially retarded… or rude! Is there a light at the end of the tunnel for them? At least, Seph walked Cloud home, which was nice despite it prolonged the awkwardness (again) and the torture. It was rather sadistic and masochistic of Sephy, I thought.

And finally in your notes at the end, was that a Helter Skelter reference? Lol, I found that hilarious!
SagenWarrior chapter 10 . 3/22/2014
hope to see more
im ur misconception chapter 10 . 3/22/2014
IT was a good update. I like the subtle dealings that are going on between the three. and like always you never fail to impress when you update.

but as for going a long time w/o updating, I know that one all to well.
UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 10 . 3/22/2014
well that was a pretty good chapter Seph was surprisingly pleasant to cloud at the restaurant I am looking forward to the next chapter please update again soon :)
yuichichan17 chapter 10 . 3/22/2014
Hi.. thank you for the update. I really like this story, so I'm really happy when I saw the update. Whether it's intentional or not, i would like to think that It seems like Zack went out of his way to set up this date for Seph and Cloud... and that's really an awkward first date... lol...

I really want to know how their relationship will develop. And it would be nice if we can see Sephiroth's point of view too...

so, please don't abandon this story or put it on hiatus again. I'll be waiting for next chapter... :)
SagenWarrior chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
hope to see more!
Wolfess-Sanu chapter 9 . 3/10/2014
I am really enjoying this. _ Cloud is such a hard working country bumpkin. Lol. And a wild Silver Elite Member appeared! She used Obsessive Fangirling. It was a critical hit. Cloud Strife used Hang Up. Silver Elite Fan fainted. XD
Ashlan chapter 9 . 12/22/2013
can you update please? when I get to see Sephy getting soft on Cloooud? I am itching to reeeeaaaadd...
StrikeLightning chapter 9 . 10/27/2013
Ah I need more of this one! Update pretty please :)
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