Reviews for Fall Apart
itanejiluver chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Nice drabble :) You really bring out all Iruka's thoughts on the moment very well.
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Short but sweet. You explain a lot in very few words, and your word selection is impeccable. I certainly would love to see you write a longer story about this subject!
Ricissa Kat chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Holy crap. This little story is such a tease! Nicely done.