|Reviews for Espionage|
| punainentaivas chapter 37 . 8/12
Perfect! I love this! I've never felt boring while reading this.
| 7ScarletLies chapter 37 . 8/4
Oh lord. Oh lord. OH LORD.
Somebody please get this is manga form. Like, now please. And preferably by Hiromu Arakawa.
TTuTT -is sad because of end of chapter but is also happy that things ended well (so far) and can't take anymore of this rollercoaster ride of feels that is happening right now
| 7ScarletLies chapter 18 . 8/3
The one use I would have for a time machine would be to go back to when I was at the age to be so obliviously innocent. Ugh, I sound like an old person and I'm only 15.
| 7ScarletLies chapter 15 . 8/3
YASSSSSSSSSSSSSS YOU GO RIZA!
Oh, Roy's sisters are going to have such a field day with this.
Anywhooooooo, since this is the first review I've made on this story, there's a couple things that must be said.
One, this review is long overdue and I honestly would have written one sooner except I always forgot to in favor of continuing to the next chapter.
Two, this story is absolutely beautiful. If you gave the summary of this story in the form of a prompt to a group of writers, I will bet you my entire book collection that most of them would go with a series of letters from Roy with no other stuff in there. So yes, I love you for that.
Three, every character is absolutely on point in terms of ... well, being in character. Honestly, I forgot that Grumman was Riza's grandfather right up until Chris Mustang literally slapped me in the face with it, which just goes to show you how convincing Grumman was trying to make it seem like he was interested in Mr. Hawkeye instead of Ms. Hawkeye. And I'd always wondered how their family tree worked!
Love ya lots! -Scarlet
| GrumpyCat503 chapter 37 . 8/1
I love this story so much!
| Yla chapter 28 . 7/14
I was worrying that my parents would hear me squeal in the middle of the night! This chapter is so adorable!
| Lex Asriel chapter 37 . 5/28
Finally finished this, and oh man. It was gorgeous from start to finish and such a joy to read. It was fun to try and guess the sisters (I already knew Sophie because of 'E is for Exotic' and Lucy on a lucky guess, but I didn't get the others right) and I loved the way you portrayed Roy and Riza's changing relationship throughout. I have no words but I loved it and will definitely be recommending it! Now that I've read all of your FMA stories I'll have to patiently wait for the next
| Guest chapter 37 . 4/25
OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO SWEEET I LITERALLY JUST SAT FOR FOUR HOURS AND READ THROUGH THIS MONSTER OF A STORY AND CURLED UP AND SQUEED AND EVERYTHING AT EVERY PART THAT NEEDED TO PULL AT MY HEART AND GIVE ME THE FUZZIES OMG WHEN IS ROY BECOMING FUHER OH GOD OH MY GOSH YOU YO YOUUUU... WONDERFUL AUTHOR WHAT THE FRICK THIS IS AMAZING WHAT DID I JUST READ A PIECE OF PURE ROMANCE THATS WHAT OMG THIS IS SOOO GOOOOOD
| maxride08 chapter 37 . 4/3
I just finished reading this story for the second time, and I had forgotten how much I love it! Royai is my favorite ship of all time, (although I've only written one story about them so far and am still working on finishing it) and I am endlessly interested in their relationship when they were younger. This is probably my favorite young Royai story!
You rock :D
| aheartmadefullmetal16 chapter 37 . 4/2
So I've just gotten finished with reading this and HOOOLY COW my heart. I downed this fic in two days and omggggg I loved every word of it. You write Riza and Roy so well! Thanks for fulfilling my fangirl needs, ahaha. They're so incredibly in character and I LOVE how you described Aunt Chris and all the girls. I'm gonna watch Brotherhood again soon and it'll be fun to have a backstory in mind for them :) I totally agree with EVERYTHING you wrote, even down to Riza's tendency to apologize a lot because of the past apprentices and all that. Ahhhhh this was amazing :)
| ohmytheon chapter 15 . 1/26
This has honestly been so great and sweet. I loved Roy's confusion about why he got beat up. what a goober. excellent writing as usual!
| ohmytheon chapter 1 . 1/25
Your writing and characterizations are so calculated and perfect. I'm just floored. It's beautiful.
| kikikikik chapter 9 . 12/5/2015
I'm not really a fan of fanfictions as many of them don't portray the characters right but u have simply proved me wrong. I love how u showed the relationship of Roy and riza! Amazing job
| Tidoo chapter 37 . 11/23/2015
That was great! Really!
You really made my weekend (I spend the last few days riding your story) and you did so great!
I wish I could elaborate, but well... I can't think of anything but great. I love how you write them, how their relationship grow...
Did I say how great it was?
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/29/2015
Such a good chapter! I think it's probably my favorite out of this whole fanfic:)