|Reviews for Protecting From the Shadows|
| Hellhound monster girl lover chapter 8 . 12/20/2016
make more chapters please
| The Good Child chapter 8 . 9/16/2016
I would live to see where the rest if this story goes.
| Scribleyellow chapter 8 . 8/30/2016
I hope you didn't give up on this story, it's really good
| my 2 guys chapter 8 . 3/5/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
| T-man777 chapter 8 . 1/3/2016
This is a really good story and I hope you get around to updating it
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/23/2015
| carloletsgo chapter 8 . 6/1/2015
| Ziltoid chapter 8 . 4/19/2015
Interesting idea, but rather rough in the execution. While your writing wasn't exactly bad, it just feels a bit rushed. Skipping over certain parts, and not following through on the deviations you made, give me the feeling that you hadn't planned things out that far ahead. Too bad though, because the idea was really promising!
Hopefully you pick it up one day, rebooting this fic. Because it definitely has potential!
| noctisxsol chapter 7 . 12/28/2014
The idea had potential, but you didn't allow the differences to flow from that change. Your style is acceptable, not boring, but your pacing needs to be kicked up. Have someone read your work after you finish, or at least carefully reread it yourself to make sure you used the right word for each situation. not bad, overall, but plenty of room for improvement.
| typhoon-voidhog95 chapter 8 . 6/15/2014
lol this is a good story very interested to see where it goes next
| Graypdrink chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
| REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 3 . 4/26/2014
more more please come back please
| Umbra.Venator chapter 8 . 3/18/2014
Tsunade just made a terrible mistake with that bet
| Wacko12 chapter 8 . 12/28/2013
| Anarky'sGreatBeast chapter 8 . 12/27/2013
Please update soon