Reviews for Separation
Megaman07 chapter 13 . 11/9/2017
you got me so close to crying but I will never be defeated by fanfiction, great story though if not a tad bit extremely depressing
GamingChiliHedgehog chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Really intense! Sonic really let himself go when Tails moved in with his adopted parents. Poor guy :( Anyway, really good for your second fanfiction :) I know I'm late reading this, but I finally got around to it.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/23/2017
but isn't sonic 15?
thegeekykitty chapter 13 . 11/18/2015
Ok I'll be honest, this story is both good and bad at the same time. It's good because it's very touching and tearjerking but bad because this just doesn't feel like a Sonic story. If you changed these characters' names and removed the fact that they're anthromorphic animals, you would never know this was a Sonic story. The main problem I have with this story is how Sonic is portrayed; Sonic is not this weepy, angsty crybaby who throws temper tantrums when angry, starves himself, becomes so obsessed with someone to the point of mental illness(seriously, you practically made Sonic a yandere for Tails), or cries. If you do a little reading, you'd see that Sonic hates crying or seeing someone else cry. Don't get my wrong, Sonic has had his moments where he was sad or angry about something but he always bounced back right away and he mostly stays positive in a situation no matter bad things get. My point is that I think this story works better as an original story rather than a Sonic fanfic.
pokemondoctorwho chapter 13 . 6/25/2015
Oh my god, this is such a touching story, I love reading every word there was from start to finish. You even may me cry, I love this story and every part of it . :)
DiddyKF1 chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
OMG! I'm just so stricken with mixed emotions after reading this story! I can think of nothing more to say ... other than it being so good!
LunaTheLunala chapter 13 . 9/30/2014
Darn. The first chapter I told myself I wouldn't cry, but now at the end... Well... YOU BROKE MY HEART! I will favorite this story! *favs, then breaks down*
Guest chapter 13 . 8/20/2014
What the fuck kid or adult first of tails has an iq of 300 he does not need school seconed sonic would not care what people say he would fight for tails you dipshit motherfucker
Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
I creid so much i ran out of tears
Moe43 chapter 13 . 8/20/2014
I'm crying so hard right now, amazing job!
Natsu-GAL chapter 11 . 7/28/2014
Me reading this story gwv3 me a heart attack nit realky though
Guest chapter 13 . 5/26/2014
..."Sonic had finally won back his little brother. Forever." something about that line is unsettling...was that intended? It seems ominous...anyway, I loved the story! :D
Guest chapter 10 . 5/9/2014
OMG you suck a good writer you made me break down literally I'm crying OMG your soo talented
Guest chapter 13 . 5/2/2014
OMG SO TOUCHING MADE ME CRY MAH EYES OUT so so beautiful and heart warming
Ultimatetailsthe chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
Ok I know that I'm a Sonic fan but this... this is the stupidest story I've ever read. I mean this is beond the liabilities of sonic the hedgehog and the worst fan fiction yet! Sorry about that i 'm jus kinda' bumed that it had to be this way.
-many apologies
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