I love this fic i think this is my third read. And i know you aint like updating this anymore but i think it would have been cool if naruto used kurams chakra in some way we only saw it used a few times. You could have ysed like a plot point where naruto got the yin hlaf of kurama and was able to put his seal anywhere with the girls technique from earlier.

Good story overall good work

what is even the point of this story? his personality is completely different, ZERO of the normal canon characters are around, and with him being older none of the canon events are even really possible. theres way too much OOC and non canon stuff for this to really be enjoyable.

i feel just because sarutobi is introduced as a grandfather figure to naruto people really don't see how much of a spineless hypocrite he is really when it comes to a lot of things. most specifically danzo obviously and even knowing itachi was loyal he tries to use it as stopping measure. killing danzo is a given regardless of how it affects anyone.

Great story. Very creative take on a butterfly effect story, and 99% of the characters were well fleshed out and had great character development. In fact, I loved pretty much everything and everyone...

except for Sukoru. Specifically Sukoru being alive. Like seriously, it was probably the only detractor from the story but I think it was a bad one. And my favorite line in the whole story was "when will my imouto be finished cooking?"

One, the "shock value" of her being alive was diminished by Shisui being alive. Yes Shisui was "officially" confirmed later in the story but everyone knew from the context clues you left. This is by far the least important point but still.

Two, there is no role for her that isn't already filled. Because you have Haya and even Ami to an extent, Sukoru feels so far out of place despite being Naruto's actual biological sister, that the whole event just feels meh. You have a brother sister relationship already with Naruto and Haya, apparently Sukoru had someone who she viewed as a brother. There is barely any emotional attachment between Naruto and Sukoru at this point. You would need A LOT of time and interactions to make the relationship here work in a satisfactory capacity, but...

Three, you didn't write enough into her character. She had like 2-3 chapters dedicated to her, to somehow overcome, what, 14-15 years of being raised in Danzo's regime. If I ctr-f'ed the entire story, Sukoru's name might not number over 100 throughout the entire story. There's just not enough going into this plot-line without making it feel like some random sort of ass plot point purely for shock-value. If the idea was have the relationship and her emotional state still be work in progress, then sure, but also many of your readers simply don't give a shit about her. There was nothing for us to latch emotionally onto here. Literally nothing. Sukoru is just a name.

The only real benefit having Sukoru be alive was becoming the catalyst trigger Naruto to actually meet his parents via seal sometime during this story instead of when he was like 40 or 50 or 60 like he said originally.

I would've significantly enjoyed more of the bittersweet memory of what Sukoru could have grown into rather than this bitter memory of what she actually did grow into.

Other than that, great story. Most of my comment is critiquing the Sukoru plot, but don't get me wrong, overally, this was still a fantastic story.

holy shit this was great, didn't even fully realize the story was over until I hit chapter 52

The sensei outing was a really good and well written scene.

Am glad that anko is alright.

Naruto and itachi and shisui please beware of Danzo and that snake orochimaru needs to die.

Am glad that Fu and naruto meet but what Danzo up to?.

Good luck naruto and shisui and itachi.

Wow.

Congratulations naruto and his friends but what happened to naruto baby sister?.

I hope that you naruto and Anko and itachi and shisui will become best friends forever.

Rest In Peace to Emi Shinohara the VA of Uzumaki Kushina.