Nah i ain’t gonna keep reading. I came to read this book for Naruto and his Sister. I haven’t even a thing that mentioned his sister.

Where is naruto sister

Continue it plssss

This has gotten much better in recent chapters I've got no more complaints.

Ok the story is nice, but i feel you keep ruining potential big payoffs in plot before they happen just because you don't want them to happen yet and dont know how to deal with them.

it's just kind of annoying to have one thing introduced and then disrupted for no apparent reason, by something nonsensical. I really liked sage, so unless this is written before that i just don't get where you're going with this.

The only problem i have with this story is reconciling the present anko with the one we know, but that may be just because we haven't seen much of her yet so we don't know how the time has changed her other than 'being in pain'.

and the whole itachi thing, if he was in the tsukiyomi for 50 hours, he genuinely could have told him everything, and i feel finding out now would have been more interesting for his future in the village, now he's just alone, and completely unaware of how bad danzo is, well i'll just keep reading.

I'm starting to worry about power levels. Ya know, Naruto is still quite debatable, but he is also very young. He will be quite OP by the time he is 14-16. Also, if you somewhat keep the usual timeline, Naruto will be, what, 20 when he goes against akatsuki? Well, anyway, he will be a lot stranger than canon. How will you deal with it, then? Buff the enemies? Make them come earlier? We will see, I guess.

Oh. Does that count as a first kiss? It was so sweet, in a very Anko way.
I just wish they bring it up in the near future, as in next chapter. It had an impact, right? I hope it did.

I think you're awesome that you are willing to bring up couple interactions this early. Nothing too heavy, but yep... the thing is, in the classic Naruto everyone is quite young to our standards, but that has to be bypassed in some ways in a romance story. Otherwise, we would have a huge amount of words without any of what we came to read, right? I'm glad you're doing it.

I think this story didn't sell itself as well as it should. I came across it's summary at least three times, but didn't think much about it.

However, it's a delightful read so far. It has a lot of interactions between the characters, and a nice touch of originality. So far, I didn't feel like I've read any copy-paste from canon.

Also, most people who try writing about stuff outside the original timeline really screw things badly, and usually only get a bit lost, not managing to fill in the blanks. You, however, started by creating a really nice base upon which the characters can develop their interactions in the near future.

I wonder how you will deal with early graduates like Itachi, and if the others will follow their lead. It would be nice if everyone (that matters) was inspired to try and graduate at the same time.

I'm really loving this story so far

I've been having a bit of a problem following who's talking when because you have someone say something and then someone else's reaction to it, making it confusing.

Completed in one go. Couldn't stop reading. Honestly one of the best fics I have read :D

SPOILER! SHISUI IS ALIVE!

This was a great story. Thx for writing it

One of the best Naruto fics out there and thankfully one that is complete. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for your efforts, mr/ms writer.