Loved the story keep up the good work :)

i love this fanfiction just laying on my bed reading for hours feels really relaxing and calms me down after school due to getting into alot of fights at school

Loved it

Man can u not involve anko in everything dude

Anko is playing these hoes

The only problem I have is Naruto teaching anko everything his father left like at least learn it before you teach it

This Chapter is One of the best writing I've seen on ffn... the contrast of what MC is willing to do for those he hold precious is beautifully repressed!

Absolute fuckin masterpiece and the best thing I've read on here yet. Still reeling from how amazing this story you have written is.

I've finally finished and this and I'll probably forever blame you for ruining every single fanfic out there, because now they'll look like some kids attempt at writing. Again, amazing dialogues and characterization.

I have to say, the dialogues and the overall plot gradually get more lively and realistic the more the story progresses, it's definitely one of the best fanfics in terms of characterization. Really great job on that front. I'd have liked a bit more descriptions of characters, but those are minor things. Awesome.

I like romance stories set in the Naruto world and this one is well-written. The dialogue could use some work, in my opinion. First, the kids just don't talk like real kids, period. No matter how ahead of their age, a kid is still a kid. These can cook, live by themselves, don't need any supervision and just generally act like adults. Where did you see kids like this? I also see that the author might be American judging by the fact that everyone is constantly smiling. Note that politely smiling isn't really a thing in the rest of the world. When every character constantly smiles for no reason it feels like they might be addled in the head to me. I'd advise to tone it down

even if it was only 1yr earlier it would've changed alot of things. one of which is Obito's Strength. he would still be dealing with Yahiko and Nagato atm and not have the time to attack Konoha

to whoever said "it doesn't matter when he is born" is wrong... obito was 15-16 when he attacked konoha. if it was 4yrs earlier he as OBITO (not as Madara) would still be alive and no one would target Kushina

Awsome

I felt like I didn’t read something important what happened to the baby?