Reviews for Small Changes
colonel.jack.jericho chapter 2 . 4/5/2013
This is already turning into a beautiful story :) please do not stop writing it half way through like a lot of authors do.
Nanashi113 chapter 2 . 4/5/2013
LimaSCP chapter 2 . 4/5/2013
what happend to his sister are she dead?
xbamsod chapter 2 . 4/5/2013
Nice chapter. It was fun reading the interactions of all the academy kids. I'm looking forward to reading more. Update Soon :D
KingPlotBunny chapter 2 . 4/5/2013
oh shisui and itachi also seems naruto has one hell of an interesting class this story is setting up to be really kick ass like your last one i am curiuos about ankos home life now though also about their sensei since i can already see what team your probably going to make anywho cant wait to see whats next
Swain chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Simply amazing. The writing, the's fantastic. Can't wait for the next chapter!
xbamsod chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
It's a really great start for a story. I love this pairing. Can't wait to read more. Update Soon
ArthurB chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
looks good tho for some reason i didn't get what happened to the child what supposed to be born.
KingPlotBunny chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
yes your back! i like this idea once again you take an original spin on a pairing i feel a little bad for naruto though witnessing the fox attack is traumatizing enough but knowing the samething that killed your family is sealed inside you at such a young age is hard i was a little unsure about the pairing at first but now i think it makes perfect sense i would like to see a bit more of a reserved naruto but not all emo also whos going to be his sensei orochimaru? that would be an interesting dynamic to the story or are you going with kakashi i dont think that would work though since i feel he might be too young or still in anbu maybe a family friend like jiriaya anyway i cant wait to see how this story goes
greekzombie chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Hey great story very interesting but I was just wondering what happened to his sister is she really dead or is something going to happen latter in the story
Maleivius chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Interesting chapter, I look forward to seeing how his life is different from the canon in this new timeline. Can't wait for the next update!
Stonus chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Dude, when I saw the alert for this story, I jizzed in my pants. I am a big fan of this pairing, and from the excellent first chapter, I can't wait to see where you take this story! Great to see you back :D
Exanime Draco chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I think that this story while the first chapter was only 5,507 words long, counting the disclaimer has great potential. This chapter was very well written, the description for the story also makes me wonder just what else is going to happen in this story. It's already become rather interesting since Naruto already understands his status as a jinnchurikki or at least for the most part. I just have to wonder how things will turn out in terms of the members of his team and team instructor. If it's Kakashi I can already see him flipping out during the true genin exam as it appears that Naruto already knows how to use the Hirashin or at least it seems like he does. At any rate I look forward to the next update as I hope it comes out soon along with potentially longer chapters. Though I also hope this story doesn't turn into a case of Naruto getting everything handed to him on a silver platter because of his family name. Though it'll be hilairious to see Anko flip out after finding out who his parents are.
2Majestic chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
If you keep updating this story, I definitely know that this story will be bigger than 'Yellow and Red makes' if you keep the cliches out of it like you have done so far like: Mobs, Civilian council having power, sympathetic kind Kyuubi, overbearing unrealistic fangirls(you can still have attractions just make it more subtle), and character bashing, and cheesy one day instant romance and instant mushy everyone's best friends after one meeting. Kind of keep it sort of dark like the Ninja world it is.

People enjoy reading about a Prodigy and Genius Naruto at Itachi's age, moreover where the hell is Jiraiya is he going to make an appearance eventually ?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
A very interesting start and I look forward to the next chapter
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