Absolute fuckin masterpiece and the best thing I've read on here yet. Still reeling from how amazing this story you have written is.

I've finally finished and this and I'll probably forever blame you for ruining every single fanfic out there, because now they'll look like some kids attempt at writing. Again, amazing dialogues and characterization.

I have to say, the dialogues and the overall plot gradually get more lively and realistic the more the story progresses, it's definitely one of the best fanfics in terms of characterization. Really great job on that front. I'd have liked a bit more descriptions of characters, but those are minor things. Awesome.

I like romance stories set in the Naruto world and this one is well-written. The dialogue could use some work, in my opinion. First, the kids just don't talk like real kids, period. No matter how ahead of their age, a kid is still a kid. These can cook, live by themselves, don't need any supervision and just generally act like adults. Where did you see kids like this? I also see that the author might be American judging by the fact that everyone is constantly smiling. Note that politely smiling isn't really a thing in the rest of the world. When every character constantly smiles for no reason it feels like they might be addled in the head to me. I'd advise to tone it down

even if it was only 1yr earlier it would've changed alot of things. one of which is Obito's Strength. he would still be dealing with Yahiko and Nagato atm and not have the time to attack Konoha

to whoever said "it doesn't matter when he is born" is wrong... obito was 15-16 when he attacked konoha. if it was 4yrs earlier he as OBITO (not as Madara) would still be alive and no one would target Kushina

Awsome

I felt like I didn’t read something important what happened to the baby?

Just want to reply to previous comment. Date of birth matter if obito doesn't strike because of that. Indeed kushina seal weaken during her labour. But you must differentiated between weaken and unrevealed. The only reason that kyuubi was released in Canon is because obito release him from the seal when the seal weakened.

sry i really like the story aspect but I have to say this dude. The date of Naruto's birth is not relevant, Kushina's seal weakens because she is giving birth so no matter what day he was born she will still release Kurama

Nice story and your writing style is also very good. Keep up the good work.

This story is so beautifully written, from the humour to capturing the readers emotions with those specific moments between our favourite characters. It’s truly a wonderful work. Kudos to you author

No not the picture. No no no surely not. This is too beautiful

Just…. ugh…. just tears.

This chapter is absolutely beautiful. I can’t even…