|Reviews for Mass Eject: For The Record|
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
Yup, time to play. Even Saren would hold a bit of hesitation for Kestrel.
| dragonist97 chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
not a bad chapter, it has a good blend between action and storytelling which i enjoy about your chapters. keep up the good work ; )
| dragonist97 chapter 17 . 6/19/2013
not bad, i like the action and suspense about this chapter. good job
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 17 . 6/16/2013
Ah, he is getting himself in trouble is he. I can see him leave and take up some more freelance work. Maybe some for Aria.
| RahXephon chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
This fic is too annoying to read. It feels like I'm listening to a sugar-rushed blond cheerleader ditz instead of a serious story teller. You need to slow down, add more contemplative stuff and generally avoid asspulls like giving your character random power ups.
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 16 . 6/11/2013
Hmmm, doubt Kieren would join Cerberus, but that doesn't mean he wont be a major factor.
| Michae1ange1o chapter 15 . 6/11/2013
Hmm, an H.D before he even woke up? that's low, the only way you'd get that would be a crippling injury. So is it eyes? arm loss or leg loss? or all of the above? I assume I'm right because he wouldn't be able to help Shepard if he was all crippled with a Spinal or Brain injury. I assume they can rebuild him, they have the technology! the six million Credit man! A biotic Cyborg commando sounds pretty kick ass no matter what you say about it.
Anyway, brilliant story, love it!
| dragonist97 chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
good chapters so far but remember to send the chapters to me for a read over :)
| The-Original-Unknown chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
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| The-Original-Unknown chapter 12 . 6/1/2013
last review from mez Kieran forgot to put initial on it
| UnboundArtyom chapter 12 . 6/1/2013
nice chapter keep up with it :D
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
Nice job. Seemed well done overall.
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 13 . 5/29/2013
He needs to stay close to her. She will need him.
| pyrovortex chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
So... do the marines not have medigel or something? Taking a couple bullets is fairly typical in canon...