|Reviews for Broken|
| Dark-nasky chapter 1 . 3/5
Hi, i liked the story, you should keep going, but in my opinion there should be more dialogue... I really liked the way you put the characters, it's interesting.
Im Waiting for the next chapter.
| 2-feathers-and-a-stone chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I hope you will eventually continue this story I just found it & I LOVE it. The way it's written is awesome I love seeing what they are actually thinking! Idk if you have future plans for this but I think it could also be cool to get a chapter on each girl like more into what actually ended up happening to make them end up there. 2 thumbs up!
| willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
twisted and seems very realistic.
| supportingcharacters chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Wow, I really like this so far! I love the way it's written, the way we get a little glimpse into one's mind before it switches to the next girl. Also the way the parentheses add so much to the lines. It's kind of unusual to come across a darker fic like this but I like where it's going and I think you've written really well so far! I don't know if you're continuing, but personally I'd love more chapters! I'll follow anyway, just in case.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Wow this is really good! I'm curious as to what happens next
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue ! It's amazing
| FarEien chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
It's kind of interesting. You dont see this kind of stories that much nowadays. Im waiting for another update. ;D
| septemberscream chapter 1 . 4/25/2013