Well, that was a lovely ending. I certainly liked the way that went more than many of the chapters. Skipping the battle scene that you are so inept at making interesting was likely for the best. Besides, it was done in a comical way, so it was rather interesting. I enjoyed this part of the ending more, even if the other one was... shall we say... more creative? Although, I had to wonder who in their right mind would give Marisa a tracker. Then I remembered that she's a kleptomaniac. Then I had to wonder how she figured out how to use it! Still a bit lost on that one.

Pokémon battles can be interesting if you mess with them. There's actually a Touhoumon story on another site that makes the battles downright exciting. They don't stick to the formula at all, though. Yelling out attacks? Rare. It's pretty much every mon for themselves as they decide what to do. But I doubt you could pull off such an interesting way of doing things. The battles were quite long, too, instead of being these tiny things. Also, this was hardly an epilogue. This was simply the end. The epilogue would more so be when Marisa does whatever it is she's doing. Also? You never should have 'told' us about the tracker. Marisa should have told us about it with a cocky grin in the epilogue!

That battle felt more like a mockery of Nascour than an actual battle... It could have been longer, and it could have been better.

Never thought I'd hear the words "glutton" and "Yukari" used in the same breath. :)

Interesting so far. Still going through it as time permits.

BYAKUREN IS NOT A GOD OR GODDESS! She is a half youkai preistess. Although there is some debate as to whether or not she became a full youkai while in Makai. But she is NOT a god!

ok, DEFINITELY Colosseum...

huh...kind of rushed

wait, where did micheal go?

isn't snag machine from Colosseum?

huh...Nue starts this as a plant...interesting...

This is so far really good!

That was a nice little chapter, although using Yuuka as a plot device seemed a tad pointless. Doesn't Marisa already know that it might be Yukari? The kinda spoils the fun of actually investigating! Taking the easy route, are we? Anywho, I suppose I'm now up to date! Not much left to say but it was an entertaining trip, and I shall await the next installment.

Heh... Rented the ship... Anyways, that's a rather unique view on youkai. However, even if that weren't true in your head canon, Murasa is a ghost. Ghosts don't even breathe in the first place, y'know?

Well, at least Kogasa acting like she did has a reason now. Not the best reason, but a reason none the less. Doesn't have to be a good reason, really. Although, you're really painting the Myouren temple in a negative light! Do you not like them?

You know, it would have been funnier if all 30 balls fell on him from above. Kogasa is... curiously dangerous. Seriously, I've never seen her played to be so uncaring for life. Not sure if that's a good or a bad thing, honestly...