Reviews for Beneath Snapping Chains
ClockworkMaster chapter 5 . 9/4/2015
Hi there! So I just found this story a few hours ago, and I must say, considering the fact I don't like 'everyone's gay' type of story, this really intrigued me. I'm also quite fussy when it comes to first person narratives but I like your writing style. Poor Kaoru - and what on earth is Kyouya up to? It's probably too late to ask for an update, but what's been left so far is something that I found enjoyable.
HazelMirror410 chapter 5 . 4/23/2015
This is so good! You are a very talented author. Will you be continuing this piece?
CE Winters chapter 5 . 3/1/2015
Property of a creepy sexually deprived demon man? Ehhhh. Demon man cuts up your designer underwear? OH NO THAT IS THE LAST STRAW.

Lololol. Kyouya is a lil creep innit. Since this hasn't been updated in almost two years I won't dare to hope it might be (believe me, I've been on your end a zillion times lolol), but I'm glad to have read this much and I'll alert it just in case! ;)
CE Winters chapter 4 . 3/1/2015
Oh my god is Kaoru a sex slave lololol. Kaoru caring more about the stress in his jeans and shirt than the fact that Kyouya's sexually assaulting him is g8 lolol
CE Winters chapter 3 . 3/1/2015
I love manga-ish Honey/Kaoru bromance! I always wished the manga got a bit more in depth about the twins when they were camped out at Honey and Mori's houses, so this was nice to read.

Kyouya, ya lil shit, water u doin lolol. (But seriously, I love your version of Kyouya so much.)
CE Winters chapter 2 . 3/1/2015
Kyouya, ya lil shit! I love how dark and twisted his intentions seem ehehehe. You have all of these characterizations down agh,especially the really strong character types, like Tamaki last chapter and Kyo this one.

The narration style continues to be my favorite part. It's just so fun and easy to read, not to mention interesting and full of character :)

I'm interested to see what Kyo will force Kao to do. His family seems to have their fingers in so many morally questionable pies that it could be anything!
CE Winters chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
You had me at "everyone's gay" lmfao. This is really great though, I was so pleasantly surprised. Your narration is absolutely killer; you're a great writer! Kaoru's narrative voice is so good - personal and snarky, captivating, etc. - and all of the dialogue of the other characters is equally on point (especially Milord).

I'm so looking forward to seeing where this is headed! It seems like Kyouya and Kaoru aren't an item yet, so I'm interested in seeing how that develops! (Though tbh, development isn't a necessity, randomly making out in a closet would also please me, because I'm v shallow and KyoKao is my new obsession lolol)
JoeMoChaos chapter 5 . 7/15/2014
Nani? Why did you stop the story, your a good author and the story is awesome! Or do you have writers' block? I might be able to help with that, just look me up k?
crc12345 chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
I love this story so far.
I Can't wait to see what happens next!
Serenity Ma Sogni chapter 5 . 4/29/2013
Ack, awesome chapter. Kyoya is one of my favourite characters but this chapter made his absolutely repulsive to me ;) amazing writing. I hope he isn't like that the entire story...;( Update soon! I am really enjoying this story!
PhantomSpinach chapter 4 . 4/28/2013
Hmm...what could he do?! (restrainsts? I don't think Kyouya would use viagra or anything but an aphrodesiac?) Loving this so far, I'm looking forward to more!
Serenity Ma Sogni chapter 4 . 4/24/2013
I like this chapter a lot, it is intriguing ;) I wonder what Kyoya is planning? Well some parts are obvious, but he isn't going to experiment on him is he? That would be creepy as all hell. I hope you update soon! -Serenity Ma Sogni
MidnightsDeath chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
Blue Sock Monkey chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Dang! Cliff hanger! Update soon and keep up the good work!
AwsomeKity chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Well sheeeeit that was awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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