Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
MioneWriter007 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
That was pretty hot and you're right definitely would be 100 times hotter with Leah! Loved this! Hope you add a chapter two one day! Lol
p3t3r33d chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
That was hot lol :)
mizz-sunshin3 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Good one-shot! I was wondering if Jake imprinted on Paul too? I know he felt the draw to Paul, but I thought that was more due to Paul having imprinted on him. If you wanted to continue, I would have no complaints. :)
alykat14 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Great story! You should continue it :)
Firefly-class chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Yup, three is a party! Think about it!
fanactic23 chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I like This Alot , Is This a one shot ?
JTCA chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I don't have the words... It was perfect :D
And, yeah, Leah being there would be more than perfect! ahaha
Call me Mrs. Meraz chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
LOLA! I think you do this shit to me on purpose LMAO! I still 3 you though!
rasheedah2907 chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Hell yeah!
Shalette chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
That was an incredibly sexy story. Thanks for the update.