Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
BookLuver02 chapter 1 . 9/27
I really like how realistic you made the lemon, it's nice to have an author who doesn't make everything perfect. But you never did say what happened to Bella, Jake tore his claws down her leg and then she fell; what happened to her?
MioneWriter007 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
That was pretty hot and you're right definitely would be 100 times hotter with Leah! Loved this! Hope you add a chapter two one day! Lol
p3t3r33d chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
That was hot lol :)
mizz-sunshin3 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Good one-shot! I was wondering if Jake imprinted on Paul too? I know he felt the draw to Paul, but I thought that was more due to Paul having imprinted on him. If you wanted to continue, I would have no complaints. :)
alykat14 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Great story! You should continue it :)
Firefly-class chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Yup, three is a party! Think about it!
fanactic23 chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I like This Alot , Is This a one shot ?
JTCA chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I don't have the words... It was perfect :D
And, yeah, Leah being there would be more than perfect! ahaha
Call me Mrs. Meraz chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
LOLA! I think you do this shit to me on purpose LMAO! I still 3 you though!
rasheedah2907 chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Hell yeah!
Shalette chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
That was an incredibly sexy story. Thanks for the update.