Reviews for Damaged Heroes
D.B. Cooper chapter 4 . 4/14/2013
Good chapter. I like hearing Beth's inner monologue. The Carl/Daryl moments were good too.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
I love this story. Daryl/Beth is so a great couple.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/12/2013 Daryl is gonna be pissed and thou no one will know it, scared! Loved it cant wait to see what happens! Please dont make us wait to long...dying to see what Daryl does!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Love love love jealous Daryl...such a base feeling that even he cant control it..loved it..then when he continues on with when Beth comes to the Daryl! Loves these two think it needs to be a slow build...these two would not rush into anything especially Daryl...he would feel completely unworthy of her. Poor Beth she wants him there for her first run...cant wait to see what happens next...great job with this...always so happy to see your updates
Moonsway chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
I'm counting on you just like Beth is counting on Daryl. This was a scary chapter, and I hope you won't let things get too dark. Poor Beth is all alone, and it's freaking me out!
History2 chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Thank you for the quick and entertaining update! I liked your twist in this chapter because I never expected that Daryl would not accompany Beth on her first run. I can't wait to see how you will write Daryl's turmoil now that Beth is in trouble. You wrote Beth's character very well in this chapter. I liked how she was scared, but capable. She held her own and survived. It wouldn't have been realistic if she suddenly turned into Xena Princess Warrior and started kicking zombie tail ends. Overall, think you did a great job with this chapter and look forward to the next one.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
Such a good chapter! Well the whole story is so good! I love Beths tender heart and I loved Daryl being jealous. Your pace is perfect...Daryl would fight any feelings and desire he felt...he would try hard to deny it...Beth is sweet and i like that..Daryl needs that. Hope she stays sweet for him...good thou thats shes learning to protect herself and the group..cant wait to see how Beth does and how will Daryl handle her going without him...little more jealousy maybe?love that emontion for Daryl because he rarely cares enough to show anything. Like to see feeling if she saw him with another woman. Love Daryl and Carl...Hope Carl does open up to him...just great writing! Love love love the way your writing this story and the your writing the chatacters. So enjoyable to read. Cant wait to see what happens next...more soon please!
drunkendick chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Hello !

I am not a Daryl/Beth lover but damn, you know how to make me love them !
Tempremental'Bones chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Just came across this and damn I couldn't stop reading. I was totally drawn in and absorbed into the story; the pace is great and the last chapter had me enthralled, and now I need another chapter asap!
Excellent writing, can't wait for the next update.
LeanneDaseyLover chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Oh my god, I could feel the fear and tension in this chapter. It's like it was rolling off my screen in waves. Fantastic writing!
Maggie actually did better than I imagined. Hopefully she'll have understood what Beth said and they'll get Daryl.
Beth can hold her own, can't she? lol So glad she was able to remember what Daryl taught her and was able to out those things to use. Now all we need is for Daryl to get his butt out there and find his I mean our girl?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Jessica xx
BloodLust87 chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
oh man :(, poor beth. Hope you update soon! Im addicted to this story :)
Wonderlandgabby chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Omg this was so good! I can not wait for the next chapter!
Pass the Porn Tea chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
A few days til the next chapter? I feel like Daryl on the roof in Atlanta. Nooooo. I need it now! Dammit, I knew the run couldn't end well, not without Daryl there. He's going to be so pissed when he finds out what happened, haha. You're killing me man, this fic has become my crack.
mrskaz453 chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Cliffhanger... Shame on you...LOL

Okay, Beth is being smart...Glad Daryl has been teaching her... She knows Daryl will come & find her...

Can't wait to see what happens when Glen/Maggie get back and tell Daryl what happened... If they had just let Daryl go with Beth, this probably wouldn't have happened... Okay, it still could have happened, but I'm still ticked at G/M...LOL

Update soon... can't wait to read the rescue and hopefully some time alone for my new favorite pair...

Thanks for the awesome update...
kenzimone chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Two updates in just as many days?! You're definitely spoiling us! Loved this chapter. Was a bit nervous about Beth going off without Daryl, and yup, turns out I was right to feel that way! I really liked Maggie's protectiveness over Beth, as well as Beth using the advice Daryl gave her as a mantra to keep on going. The whole hospital setup was really creepy, and almost as awesome as Beth going knife crazy on the walkers and fighting her way out. I can't wait to see Daryl come to her rescue (he's going to be PISSED, isn't he?).
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