Reviews for Legacy
Guest chapter 36 . 7/22
INAPROPREATE, I love this story and I know that it is M but please, don't do anymore. Thank you
Guest chapter 30 . 7/21
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Mezzy2468 chapter 69 . 7/21
This story is AMAZING! Literally one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It's really hard to believe that this is your first fanfic. You are an awesome writer!
S-Lioness chapter 69 . 7/20
Loved your story so much _
It was intense.
Thank you for writing this.
S-Lioness chapter 61 . 7/19
Ooooh! Madara is back *u*
Can't wait to see this
flaming kyubi chapter 8 . 7/19
Clichés', Cliché's everywhere.
Jason chapter 33 . 7/14
I always thought sakura was a hitch i don't see why anyone likes her she literally hit naruto for the pettiest reasons
zainko1234zainko chapter 7 . 7/16
Oi por allí que tenías 15 años cuando escribiste esto, pero eso no te salva. Con lo que e leído, prácticamente una puta tortura, solo debo decir esto : Un trabajo mediocre, ya sea la gramática, la historia en sí, eres retardado? Pregunto, pones en vergüenza a cualquiera de esa edad con tu intelecto de crío de primaria. Antes de hacer un Fanfic, ve primero la serie de Naruto bien y no te quedes con lo que quieres. Estimado de eso, tus pjs son prácticamente oc's, alejados del canon , sin importar que sea un Fanfic, que todos san retratados como una mierda sin personalidad que gira entorno al bandas del protagonista(que realmente de badass no tiene nada, por como lo pones es prácticamente un basura de pj), no salva nada.
No sirves para escritor, tu manera de contarla es molesta, por decir lo menos. Acceleras demasiado el como lo cuentas, la forma de reacciones o descripciones, dan mucho que desear. En palabras simples, tu historia da asco. Perdí mi tiempo leyendo esta basura, aún pese a que lo hize por aburrimiento. Por cierto, en el romance tampoco vales ni mierda, además de que eres un perturbado, meter a niños de 8 años a hacer esas cosas, y desciende que se aman siendo que apenas se conocen siquiera, mucho menos la edad, la forma estúpida en la que los reúnes, sacas a la loca de Hinata del clan y bla bla bla... Esta escusa de historia es simplemente basura, de principio a fin.
S-Lioness chapter 36 . 7/16
If I may point out, Tsunade's seal should have stayed as yin. Because most cells -especially in elders- can't division -ex. brain cells- so it should stay as yang as they are created. Unless you are making her technique a mere speed up.
S-Lioness chapter 33 . 7/16
I see, in cannon Sasuke had to kill Naruto to get ms as he was hsi best friend but as he is on a different team Sakura was the closest and he succeeded in killing her. I can see why he can't be redeemed in this story.
S-Lioness chapter 32 . 7/16
Seriously? Fireball Shadow? How would a ball of fire -that projects light- make a shadow? Try to light a match and see if the fire has a shadow.
Jason chapter 30 . 7/13
So is naruto not going to have the golden chakra cloak or what?
S-Lioness chapter 16 . 7/15
Poor Shino, I wonder if he feels like a third wheel xD
Chaoticboy19 chapter 1 . 7/5
just re-read this story for seemingly the 50th time. still a great read. please update the sequel soon
ZhaWarudo chapter 16 . 6/30
This is as far as I can go, 15 and a half chapters
Sure sasuke is arrogant emo faggot but he had the strength to back it up and he didn't underestimate every fking opponent or overestimate himself. You made sasuke a dumb idiot who even after seeing everyone is 100x stronger than him, he still thinks he's the best wtf, also everytime he sees a new strong tehnique he says : I want that... he wasn't such a bratty princess in the original, ffs this fanfic is really trash and I could write 5 pages of all the bad grammar you did and wrong personalities, jutsus... sure you can change some personalities coz it's a fanfic, but you did a shit job at it
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