The plot is too fast paced too slow down a little but good effort

The characters r hella overrated here man like hinata is so cringe and naruto isnt even himself anymore, all his endearing qualities aren't present and he's just a shadow of a serious minato and madara, more like the older obito except not as likable. You also made Sasuke a very bad character without understanding the background and qualities of Sasuke. He's not just a typical hero and cares about others in his own during genin days. Hinata is way too overrated too, she's naturally shy and isn't that strong in the beginning. Also, naruto just suddenly changing from deadlast in a freaking day is too crazy even for ffs. This ff is just bad with the characters tho I guess the plot and jutsu ideas are ok.

No hate but the entire thing is just unrealistic even for an anime. Naruto and Hinata are being so ooc its cringe. I'm done with this ff and read only 3 chps. _

You shall no PEIN

this book is on Wattpad bruh

This story is sooooo awesome

are you fucking kidding me? JUST KILL HIM

such trash, holy god.

kawaii desu ne

It’s been a while since I read this and I did bother rereading but what chapter did Yugito get captured

And I will be stopping around here that was way over the top for me.

I love this series so far I was referred it by a guy in a YT comment section truly dope work thus far

he learned what a pure blooded Uchiha when he graduated (12 yrs)
flashback has Kurama and him mentioning it at 9

"she belongs to the village" is a crazy statement

Wow this chapter was amazing. I lived the fighting and the just so much danmmmm