Reviews for Legacy
Makuro767 chapter 8 . 5/14
As a cat lover I am horrified
I'll have to go hug my cat after this. Animal abuse is no joke to me, especially considering I know how a pained scream from a cat sounded like. I heard it when a kitten yowled from being crushed by a reversing car. That is not something to joke about...

Max chapter 12 . 5/11
giving naruto EMS and making him deal with some weakling is a really boring plot DVP.
Max chapter 5 . 5/11
ch5 naruto is not talking but giving speeches, also he's giving speeches like an old politician.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/11
ch3 LoL, he is Madara's son and can't control the Kyuubi? LoL talk about Bad Plot!
lara5170 chapter 36 . 5/9
Wouldn't they have been brought back to life naked or did he make them clothes?
sunsetsunshine chapter 26 . 5/3
"Brother" is a term used for a boy you share a parent with. "Sibling" is the gender-neutral alternate to this term and is used for anyone you share a parent with, with nothing to do with gender. "Sister" is used for girls you share a parent with. "Brothers", "siblings", and "sisters" are the respective plural versions of this. English grammar and referrals are complicated.
HurZysn chapter 69 . 5/2
Had to go back and reread the story after a few years of last reading it and just like then I still love the story one of the best on FF
Proslayers chapter 46 . 4/28
very good
Ohma chapter 6 . 4/26
wow man, you absolutely suck at dialogues
Ohma chapter 4 . 4/26
way too fast paced, the characters don't feel alive you should describe their actions while they spoke otherwise it just feels like they're standing still reading from a script.
stan rules chapter 44 . 4/25
you put a leash on shikamaru? that's gold!
gauravdewani0126 chapter 69 . 4/23
Ryan chapter 69 . 4/18
Your writing definitely improved over time, I'm glad I stuck with it through the start.
Aedwards179 chapter 64 . 4/15
they definitely should've destroyed the rinnegan.
Aedwards179 chapter 60 . 4/15
oh him putting on the cloak is just weird.
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