Reviews for Breathe In, Breathe Out
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
So sweet thanks for the read
vanrigsby chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
AW. (Sorry it took me so long to review haha).

This was beautiful. Thank you so much. I am honoured! Honestly! I think you kept them so beautifully in character, and I think that you did a beautiful thing by having Jane help her. It's really rare to have Jane do something selfless like that, and it was really good to see in this fic.

I think that this storyline is so lovely :D You started out so angsty, kind of broke my heart a little, but you ended it really sweetly.

Brilliant, brilliant work, not that I expected any less! Keep it up :D

xxx Grace.
ngocquevt chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
"Don't let them win." Jane is the one saying it to Grace, and helping her get some peace for her own soul. That's so warm, but sad.
macisgate chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Awesome story! Glad Grace got a peaceful sleep.
Bethy1416 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
I agree with Sue-Shay! I actually enjoy seeing the effect Craig's death is having on her. It shows how vulnerable she can be and I think it's adorable, especially when Rigsby wants to comfort her! So sweet :)
Sue Shay chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Oh, the pathos!

This is a terrific story. "She doesn't bother cleaning up the mess". Love the symbolism! Fantastic.

Very good piece full of many clever phrases and intense images. Go, Lothiriel84! Go!